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Life is my death
And Death is my life Fold my arms across my chest No matterif If I can look cuz my soul sees the rest NOW REALLY JUST TTHHIINNKK!!!!!!!about that **** |
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Change the word 'death' to 'love' and you got it right..
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Life is my death And Death is my life Fold my arms across my chest No matterif If I can look cuz my soul sees the rest NOW REALLY JUST TTHHIINNKK!!!!!!!about that **** adding to your poem Life is my death and love is my life as i tend to fold my arms across my chest no matter if i can look for my soul will lay upon ones hands as my love shall continue in one heart and soul |
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Life is my death And Death is my life Fold my arms across my chest No matterif If I can look cuz my soul sees the rest NOW REALLY JUST TTHHIINNKK!!!!!!!about that **** I get it and you....Life is finite, death infinite....The body is just a temporary resting place for the soul which, after death, moves on and sees all...Nice job Mr. C...Welcome! |
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To the point.. inevitable reality for some.. I like your style.. good write
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