Topic: WIDE AWAKE
flech11's photo
Wed 10/24/12 10:11 PM
fall like rain wash away sorrow
rise like kings of tomorrow
can you feel this
are you breathing
is this blood im seeing
on these hands of mine
cast aside spent and barrowed
still run with doubt
i can feel this
im still breathing
theres no blood left
in my veins
can you here me
are you crying
take my hand friend save the light...
wide awake
terrified
bloodshot eyes
hands of steel
cold as ice
cant subside
all this pain
take my hand take my hand take my hand!


mig25's photo
Thu 10/25/12 01:54 AM
You're an amazing poet flech11 . . . nice work

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Thu 10/25/12 05:10 AM
Good morning young man!flowerforyou ...I always enjoy reading you....and I always think to myself, "old soul on board":smile:

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Thu 10/25/12 10:08 AM
drinker :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: