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The evening sounds are synonymous
Identical, interchangeable A mobius noise that transfigures drone And disfigures serenity This is not the time for questions or requests To go ignored or unanswered Chasing cats with imaginary brooms While cobwebs clutter The most secretive sections of thought Those linked to action Lost in name Exhaled in a puff of smoke Waved by a meticulous wand Summoned to supper To dine on beads of sweat Pregnant droplets That spill like beans Stalking the small of your back Or lurking around the brow If it added up It would be the sum Of all things That amounts to nothing A whisper in a deaf man’s ear |
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Oh wow..Niiiiiice....
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Incredible write. Thanks for sharing and welcome.
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an old deaf man pretending
not to hear looks into her eyes for communication wistfully touching her without contact silent music only they understand a slow simultaneous smile |
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Nice write. Welcome to mingle and the creative writing forum.
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absolutely breathtaking and provoking yet the insignificant truth thank you
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The evening sounds are synonymous Identical, interchangeable A mobius noise that transfigures drone And disfigures serenity This is not the time for questions or requests To go ignored or unanswered Chasing cats with imaginary brooms While cobwebs clutter The most secretive sections of thought Those linked to action Lost in name Exhaled in a puff of smoke Waved by a meticulous wand Summoned to supper To dine on beads of sweat Pregnant droplets That spill like beans Stalking the small of your back Or lurking around the brow If it added up It would be the sum Of all things That amounts to nothing A whisper in a deaf man’s ear Incredible, delicious....Perfection! |
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Edited by
Mirage4279
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Wed 10/17/12 05:23 PM
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leigh!!!!
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