Topic: The Sum of All Things
RenaissanceChick's photo
Sat 10/13/12 06:22 PM
The evening sounds are synonymous
Identical, interchangeable
A mobius noise that transfigures drone
And disfigures serenity
This is not the time for questions or requests
To go ignored or unanswered
Chasing cats with imaginary brooms
While cobwebs clutter
The most secretive sections of thought
Those linked to action
Lost in name
Exhaled in a puff of smoke
Waved by a meticulous wand
Summoned to supper
To dine on beads of sweat
Pregnant droplets
That spill like beans
Stalking the small of your back
Or lurking around the brow
If it added up
It would be the sum
Of all things
That amounts to nothing
A whisper in a deaf man’s ear

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Sat 10/13/12 06:26 PM
flowers :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

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Sat 10/13/12 08:46 PM
Oh wow..Niiiiiice....

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Sun 10/14/12 09:06 PM
Incredible write. Thanks for sharing and welcome.

s1owhand's photo
Mon 10/15/12 06:33 AM
an old deaf man pretending
not to hear
looks into her eyes for
communication
wistfully touching her
without contact
silent music only they understand
a slow
simultaneous
smile

:smile:

pennyg281's photo
Mon 10/15/12 12:06 PM
Nice write. Welcome to mingle and the creative writing forum. flowerforyou

flech11's photo
Tue 10/16/12 11:48 AM
absolutely breathtaking and provoking yet the insignificant truth thank you

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Wed 10/17/12 04:58 PM

The evening sounds are synonymous
Identical, interchangeable
A mobius noise that transfigures drone
And disfigures serenity
This is not the time for questions or requests
To go ignored or unanswered
Chasing cats with imaginary brooms
While cobwebs clutter
The most secretive sections of thought
Those linked to action
Lost in name
Exhaled in a puff of smoke
Waved by a meticulous wand
Summoned to supper
To dine on beads of sweat
Pregnant droplets
That spill like beans
Stalking the small of your back
Or lurking around the brow
If it added up
It would be the sum
Of all things
That amounts to nothing
A whisper in a deaf man’s ear



Incredible, delicious....Perfection!flowerforyou

Mirage4279's photo
Wed 10/17/12 05:23 PM
Edited by Mirage4279 on Wed 10/17/12 05:23 PM
leigh!!!!