Topic: In awe of you | |
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I can see you there
Behind your facade Your kindness and grace compassion and love The one I fall for when I see it in raw your light is beyond what leaves me in awe Your voice is serene and hypnotic It makes me forget all reason and logic Your eyes tell a story I wish I could read I'm sure it would leave me so weak in the knees I see you- in wonder you leave me confused I love you dear stranger For just being You. |
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nice writes
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Thank you kindly.
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Yes, nice write..
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I can see you there Behind your facade Your kindness and grace compassion and love The one I fall for when I see it in raw your light is beyond what leaves me in awe Your voice is serene and hypnotic It makes me forget all reason and logic Your eyes tell a story I wish I could read I'm sure it would leave me so weak in the knees I see you- I really enjoyed this . . . and welcome in wonder you leave me confused I love you dear stranger For just being You. |
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Hits like a hammer. Awesome write.
Welcome to mingle. |
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Thank you kindly :)
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Wow. thanks!
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don't know which one is more attractive and eye catching ...your looks or your pen...they don't have a salute smiley here, or else would have loved to use that for your literary endeavours
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a very much welcome addition to mingle's poet society...
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