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As I turn over on my side.
Your hand starts to glide. Just the touch of your finger tips. As they lightly touch my hips. Quickly sending shivers up my spine. The kind that feels so divine. I can feel your warm breath against my skin. Slowly the fire starts to burn within. Your hands start to explore. Soon I’m my body starts to soar. This feeling takes me up in the clouds so high. As I feel your hand upon my thigh. I’m almost to the point to plea. I plead for you at that moment to take me. In the distance I can hear the phone ring. Slowly the sound starts to bring. Me awake and out of this beautiful dream. That was taking me to the extreme. As I look back across the bed. Those memories have already fled. It was only in my mind. Slowly the events start to unwind. For again it would seem. It was only a dream. |
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Very nice but sad....where's he at next to me..i keep wondering that
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Awwwwww girl yours will be there soon. Ya lucky kitty lmao
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Another beautiful one.It's to bad we have to wake up from those kinds of dreams.
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MY DEAR TSX, IF YOU KEEP FOLLOWING THEM, ONE DAY, YOU HAVE THEM ALL COME TRUE
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Humm frank I hear you but.......... at times even the dreams seem to far away to grasp.
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Hey stop stealing my dreams! I had one very similiar to that not long ago... (LOL)
(mine was a bit more heated, can't talk about stuff like that here...hehehe )Have to go to another forum to hear about it...LOL!!! |
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tsx, keep working on them
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Great poem, I think dreams may be more real than reality. Man, there are some great poets here, you're one of them, to me a great poet means to me, writing from your heart, all the heart, you go girl!
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jimz wow those words amaze me lately I have had a few say somethng very similar to what you just said. Funny how you tend to let those words slide by thinking they are saying that just to be nice. Humm so why did what you just say not slide by as well. Now I know for those that have said it and if they read this I will hear a few I told you so's. But the reasons your words seem to hit a bit harder is because one you don't know me nor me you on a friendly everyday thing. I see you as being very straight forward person and if you don't like someones work I also see you sitting there flat out tell them what is wrong with it. I only started writing a little over a year ago and had only wrote 4-5 if that many before coming to this site. There were a couple that inpired me here to try those are Jimi366, Sweetcountrygirl, & ChubbyCherubPoet at first arriving to this site I very seldom read any poetry at all. Then I got hung on the poetry here for I could relate to it as well understand it.
And yes when I write it comes from the deepest part of my heart a part that no one has every seen or taken the time too. They are the way I feel now or at the time it happen. I don't just try to find words that rhyme instead I use the words I want to then find ones that will flow with them. I just write down the words that are there once I start. I have no clue how long it normally takes one to write a poem from start to finish for I have never asked. I just assumed when they start one they sit down and write it. In less than an hour Hummm now I could be very wrong there too. But I do thank you for your words moret than you will ever know for they have deeply touched my heart. Humm and what you said about you think our dreams are more real than reality. Thos words have more truth in them then most will ever realize for I do believe that. We tend to live through our Dreams. there is a quote I have said since the day I have been here and it is: Keep your dreams alive, for when we quit dreaming, we quit living!! again thank you jimz |
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Dreams are beautiful things to have.
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a beautiful dream .... that leaves a longing...
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