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Why must fate be so cruel a
master? Does he enjoy tormenting the hearts of men and women? How can this feeling be? Such a powerful aroma of passion, love, and destruction. How can it be... So simple, and yet a trial of unimaginable turmoil... Why must fate put us to the test... I fear for my heart, as the shattered pieces are like sand dripping down my chest. I fear, for nothing. Is this just a temporary fixation of grief? Will my heart be kindled by the furnaces of time? How can one know... Only the hourglass of the devil will tell. |
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Love the texture Jonah Welcome!!!
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All we do is blame the devil
whereas in us lies all evil fate is nothing but a mystery and tomorrow we will be nothing but history just do deeds and in your memory keep bcpz as you sow so shall you reap heehe this is what i came up with in few mins after reading your poem :) and keep writing the way u play with words is astounding |
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Awesome write....
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Those are wonderful words and so complimentary to this, and it is so true. We are our own worst enemies.
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Again, thank you leigh! :)
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Looking forward to read another of your writing soon :)
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