Topic: The Lost Child | |
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I am the lost child and
all i want is to go home i was a kid when i was lost and my memories are frozen. now i am the lost child and all i want is to go home At home all i used to play and i hope ill find my way At home i was like a king and all day i used to sing but now i am the lost child and all i want is to go home I miss my mother's lap and my father's clap i miss my toys and my bed my tears have made my eyes go red i am the lost child and all i want is to go home At home i used to eat all day and now i fight for a meal a day once i used to live like a king and now i am nothing but a beggar i live and live just in hope that somebody will find me as i am the lost child and all i want is to go home The grass is the bed and the sky is the roof for me i see nothing but light at the end of the tunnel and hope someday i will find home as i am the lost child and all i want is to go home hope this one is good its just raw ill edit it later and make some necessary changes please give me advice to make it better |
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adding on to your poem
as im a lost child where do i sleep how do i learn as new things tend to come my way as the world that i see has no promise for me to see as i continue to grow i see nature take its course to bring a new lite towards me a new direction of a hopefully promising journey that one wishes to take as i see the smile through the sunshine with no question ask i was a lost child with no future but my future has been solved i have a home of love and a bed with comfort as i learned today i am somebody and dreams can come true |
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really sweet and well its our poem now all thanks to the wonderful addition you made to it
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no longer lost
yet the child remains for a child sees the world in color not in black white or grey rejoice now sweet child in the grass where you lay for virtues upon you there's comfort where ever you lay |
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really amazing thank you Queen and Tayah this is a poem dedicated to all those children who get lost and hope they can be home someday
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no longer lost yet the child remains for a child sees the world in color not in black white or grey rejoice now sweet child in the grass where you lay for virtues upon you there's comfort where ever you lay adding on as mother nature has come and gone but has given you a place to call home as you will no longer feel lost but safe the world has given you the warmth of family, food love and friends together we are once again |
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may have felt
like a burdan in so many ways as my heart had been torn no place to call home, nor a bed to sleep on i wasent wanted truly in my eyes as my mom i would say your a bastard nothing but a pathetic child what a way to speak to one a child needs love not abuse that we know got no money standing on the road to beg is not a living for anyone that you know as love comes in many ways so does abuse but love is a better understanding as where proof has been truly shown |
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To all writers. |
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To all writers. Agreed, bravo..... |
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thank you so much Tazzops Queen123 Tayah and Up2us thanks so much for the comments and wonderful additions to the poem :)
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like...
and there are times still that all i want is to go home... |
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Edited by
Up2Us
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Sun 09/16/12 10:32 AM
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Yes, even the very lost want to still go home at times..... . |
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Nice harsh !
Enjoyed reading it KiK |
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