Topic: "These Moments"
sweetcountrygirl's photo
Sat 08/04/07 09:38 PM
Moments you can't take back
Passing by
In the silence I wait
The darkness my blanket
Engulfing, pulling me under once again
Sadness tugging at my heart
Light slowly fades away
Once so bright and warm
I struggle not to sink into the emptiness
that awaits
The cold reality of what I knew
I could never escape
I'm falling

SCG 08/04/2007

brokenheart :cry:

superstar23's photo
Sat 08/04/07 09:41 PM
:cry: Very nice...

ArtGurl's photo
Sat 08/04/07 09:42 PM
:cry: flowerforyou

theshotgunrule's photo
Sat 08/04/07 09:43 PM
ouch, what inspired this poem?

sweetcountrygirl's photo
Sat 08/04/07 10:02 PM
(for some reason the remainder of the poem didn;'t post?)
here is the rest of it..

back into my sea of darkness
and I am swimming in the
frozen familiarity of my tears...

???
noway ohwell

sweetcountrygirl's photo
Sun 08/05/07 10:50 AM
Moments you can't take back
Passing by
In the silence I wait
The darkness my blanket
Engulfing, pulling me under once again
Sadness tugging at my heart
Light slowly fades away
Once so bright and warm
I struggle not to sink into the emptiness
that awaits
The cold reality of what I knew
I could never escape
I'm falling
back into my sea of darkness
and I am swimming in the
frozen familiarity of my tears...

okay, may be better to read this way, all together...

theshotgunrule...just what i was feeling at the time...thanks for reading...:flowerforyo.u:

artgirl and superstar...thank you both...flowerforyou

jimz's photo
Sun 08/05/07 02:37 PM
I hope you can see my tears, and again, I hope I can see you smile, when a friend hurts, like you, I hurt too, when my tears dry up, I'll be crying from somewhere deep inside, for you, my friend, for you...

TxsGal3333's photo
Sun 08/05/07 03:01 PM
Ohh girlfriend you know that I will not let you slide back into the darkness. You maay have a few days to hide there under your covers and cry the much needed tears. But....... then it's time for you to find your way back. From your written words you know you will follow the light that you faintly see.

Just rememeber my friend I will be here till the end!!bigsmile

Gryphyn's photo
Sun 08/05/07 04:53 PM
:cry: Life is too short to hide away, to grow in tears and happiness is the price we pay for unrelenting Love. The price has been high yet it was well worth the tears I have shed.

flowerforyou drinker brokenheart bigsmile

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LAMom's photo
Sun 08/05/07 09:59 PM
(((((( Wanda ))))))
:cry: flowerforyou