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Topic: ~ last night
teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Fri 08/31/12 05:27 AM
~ last night last night i cried myself to sleep last night i removed my gown it pooled on the floor the butterflies trapped within the purple last night i had a dream in the dream i saw the face i had before i was born last night i cried myself to sleep

oldhippie1952 Joined Mon 03/14/11 Posts: 22693	Fri 08/31/12 05:31 AM
very nice.

tazzops Joined Sat 12/20/08 Posts: 33333	Fri 08/31/12 06:54 AM


pennyg281 Joined Thu 11/08/07 Posts: 4348	Fri 08/31/12 07:05 AM


poppashroom Joined Tue 06/28/11 Posts: 425	Fri 08/31/12 01:27 PM
I see

Up2Us Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 3926	Fri 08/31/12 03:34 PM
Beautiful write.....

bastet126 Joined Fri 12/07/07 Posts: 15553	Fri 08/31/12 05:29 PM
always enjoy reading you teasingb :)

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Fri 08/31/12 06:47 PM
oldhippie1952...thankyou tazzops...don't cry... pennyg281... poppashroom...shhhhh... Up2Us...pleased,me bastet126...thankyou,smile

Teditis Joined Sun 03/07/10 Posts: 3597	Wed 01/30/13 06:06 PM
~ last night last night i cried myself to sleep last night i removed my gown it pooled on the floor the butterflies trapped within the purple last night i had a dream in the dream i saw the face i had before i was born last night i cried myself to sleep Simply awesome...

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Wed 01/30/13 06:19 PM
a shy,thankyou.

Teditis Joined Sun 03/07/10 Posts: 3597	Wed 01/30/13 06:31 PM
I know that I red this one before... and was moved by it. Not sure why I chose tonight to respond to it... and then rather lamely. I see the gown, the purple, the butterflies. I think of an image of myself that I've long since forgot. (No, I've never worn a purple gown... or any gown at all... just to clear.) I just like it... your write. Never the right words though...

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Wed 01/30/13 06:34 PM
smiling something is right...

Teditis Joined Sun 03/07/10 Posts: 3597	Wed 01/30/13 06:41 PM
haha, "something" is always right. I took classes in Cryptic... You've got a PhD.

Zimzane2 Joined Mon 01/14/13 Posts: 221	Wed 01/30/13 07:21 PM


Ainjel Joined Sat 01/24/09 Posts: 3610	Wed 01/30/13 07:32 PM
...beautiful piece...

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