I know it isn't much, but I figured I would try the short and simple profile instead of the two or three paragraphs I had written up. Yes I do know I do lack some close ups of me smiling, but like it says in the profile, I will upload them as I get them taken. Overall though, should I go back to a well thought out paragraph, or stick with short and simple?

I think you make it very clear who you are and what you are about. I personally dont like rambling, long profiles. I get bored, unless it is good poetry :-) Yours is much longer than mine, but I make mine super short for a purpose. It looks fine IMO.

Thank you kindly. :)

Unless someone particularly likes musicians, god or going out to eat, it may be hard to see if they've got something in common with you. It also doesn't tell us what you're looking for here.

Thank you for the advice singmesweet! I did put the musician part up because a good 90% of the women I know refuse to date musicians. I figured it would be best to just simply throw that out there first, just for a fair heads up.
About God, well, I know that is "thinning the herd" by a great number, but I figure it is a good way to find the one. I am not looking for just any date ya know?

I honestly am not very picky when it comes to looks or anything like that, if a woman is a God fearing woman and understands that I am a musician and is not running for the hills after those two statements alone, I figure she has to be within the 5% of women on this planet who would be willing to tolerate me for longer than 12 minutes. :P

You did ask for advice, so that's what I gave. You don't have to take it, though. :)

Oh I know, I take all advice I get into consideration and it is much appreciated. I figure I will ride this short and simple profile out for a short bit to see how that wave rides and make adjustments in due time. Thank you again though :)

If it works for you, awesome. I tend not to contact guys with really short profiles, because something about their profile has to catch my eye. The shorter the profile, the less likely that will happen.