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I said I know your mine.
if you stay in my hands you will be just fine.
and these are not just lines.
there here to show you what I feel.
deep down in side theres a will.
to show you there no need for pills.
but there is love in the air.
silk is what I feel when I touch your hair.
and your love is all I can bear.
I love you and only you I swear.
to love you as you would be fare.
and if they hate the way were in love I don't care.
I love the way she give me them love glares.
I fell so love exspecialy when she stares.
her smile lights me up like a flair.

ladywind was that good enough.

Yes, and this thread is not to critique anyones poetry. www.Allpoetry.com is a critique site. Thank you for contributing. She is/was a lucky lady.

thnx lady haha I was just wondering if it was good because a lot of people like/dislike my poetry.

The sword we will find as soon as more info is sound and we can talk to Merlin alone tomorrow, but what if tonight is the only time???

tonight is not the last
this legend lives on,
the lady in the lake
her spell has been cast,

the sword and the stone
were reft apart
as two were one
she stole my heart.

Yes, please.

tommo / Ireland

A vision, a warning in Camelot,
Merlin sees Morgana
and the scheme she does plot.
To turn the Queen against her King

yes please
join the fun
have a great time
writing this one

be happy and smile
warm the day
and send that frown
miles away.

:)

miles away indeed indeed I say '
my frown has no say.
but a smile will lead the way.
is that a girl a girl I pray.
I pray that her smile will make my day.
and that I can carry all her pains away.

Knight, with your wandering eye
you must journey to rescue a Queen.
A kingdom is about to fall to a feind!
Morgana, beautiful enchantress, but sly
has enspelled our Queen most fair.
A prisoner of magick on an island most queer.

This prison, this fortress
stand it will not
the POWERS that be
Will see it forgot

With Merlins Cast
and armour that shines
brothers in arms
the Queen they pine

This evil cell
We'll bring to the ground
It is not formidable
from the knights of the round

While you are away from me,
When we must be apart;

Take these words I give to you,
And tuck them in your heart.


Keep them there inside of you,
For only you to hear;

Then if you're ever lonely,
Just know that I am near.


You are the very sunshine,
That shines into my soul;

The value of a smile from you,
Worth more than diamonds and gold.


You are the inspiration,
That causes me to soar;

And with each passing moment,
I only love you more.


You are the song with in me,
The rhythm and the rhyme;

A song that grows much sweeter,
With the passing time.


So take these tender spoken words,
And tuck them in your heart;

Then as long as my heart beats for you,
We'll never be apart.


[Allison Chambers Coxsey]