Topic: "Hell on Earth"
sweetcountrygirl's photo
Fri 08/03/07 11:17 AM
Man possessed of a devil
Hell on Earth
Earth is Hell
It was a gift long, long, long ago
This earth was a beautiful place
A gift to man before he was possessed
By Evil and Hatred and Greed
Beginning with Adam and Eve
and Cain and Able
Now look at us
Lying and Bleeding
Killing and Stealing
Living of this world
In this world of Sin
Where Lust is a must
and Love is unheard of
Continously provoking the wrath of God
Hell on Earth
Earth has become our Hell
The Devils demons walk among us
Cloaked as Angels with forked tongues
Angels with beckoning faces
Teasing and Taunting
Edging us along
Laughing at mans failures
and unforgiving nature
Begging for more entertainment
The Devils Angels are always watching
Following orders
Watching and Waiting
To devour another fallen soul


brokenheart :cry: brokenheart
SCG 08/03/2007

HillFolk's photo
Fri 08/03/07 11:22 AM
I liked it.

:smile:

The Hell Of Heaven

In the burning lake of fire I burn.
Because of love I could not learn.
There was no way I could forgive.
So in darkness I choose to live.

The light burns my sensitive eyes.
Like a mole I crawl only to survive.
I am immortal and I can not die.
In my rage I can only offer alibi.

But it didn't used to be this way.
Once I could see the light of day.
I could fly but now I only squirm.
Now I am only a disgusting worm.

Once I was the chosen of God.
Now I am only his striking rod.
I am the testament of great evil.
Some folks say I am the Devil.

In my shame I will live forever.
Love's embrace I had severed.
But I will never be all alone.
Welcome to my humble home



sweetcountrygirl's photo
Fri 08/03/07 11:33 AM
Hillfolk...thanks, glad you liked it and responded with another...I usually don't write in this style, but wanted to try it...

I like yours too!!!flowerforyou


HillFolk's photo
Fri 08/03/07 11:40 AM
Thank you, Sweet.flowerforyou I have an amends to make to someone that said they were sorry to me but they said it indirectly and it only just came to me that I wasn't forgiving. I was seeking forgiveness but I wasn't offering it.:smile:

pkh's photo
Fri 08/03/07 12:59 PM
Sad but so true.Very powerful writting.flowerforyou

sweetcountrygirl's photo
Fri 08/03/07 01:06 PM
Hillfolk, it was clear to me in this line what you were saying... "Because of love I could not learn.
There was no way I could forgive." Sometimes the hardest lesson in life is to learn to forgive...(especially ourselves) flowerforyou

((((((((((pkh))))))))))a hug for you, and a flower too...flowerforyou Hope you have a wonderful day...

HillFolk's photo
Fri 08/03/07 02:49 PM
Thank you, Sweet. I hope you have a wonderful day as well.flowerforyou

The Shadow Of Ignorance

I tried to avoid you because I didn't want to feel your pain.
I fell victim to my happiness knowing that I'd see you again.
I let others wait on you and inquired how that you fared.
I watched in the shadows because I was ignorant of care.
I was high and mighty; Thinking of scripture and verse.
I could see only my view but was blinded by the reverse.


TxsGal3333's photo
Sat 08/04/07 05:20 AM
Awww awesome to both of you very good.bigsmile