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Topic: Listen
poppashroom Joined Tue 06/28/11 Posts: 425	Mon 08/13/12 03:54 PM Edited by poppashroom on Mon 08/13/12 04:13 PM
Released from adolescence, thrown into the night Time for you to go out there stand up now and fight. Is this really how it is, gunfodder at enemy lines? “Go make a difference” it was whispered You just gotta’ give it time.. The enemies abhorred me, for what here did I know? forced to sleep outside Could I help them grow? Questions, questions questions still, one eve I crept off baying to listen for the familiar sounds of what my family were saying

bastet126 Joined Fri 12/07/07 Posts: 15553	Mon 08/13/12 07:06 PM
hugs to the place where this write came from.

tazzops Joined Sat 12/20/08 Posts: 33333	Tue 08/14/12 07:05 AM


Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Tue 08/14/12 07:47 AM
What price the spoils of war?...Enjoyed this very much Rich!

poppashroom Joined Tue 06/28/11 Posts: 425	Tue 08/14/12 10:39 AM
hugs to the place where this write came from. Thank you I think

poppashroom Joined Tue 06/28/11 Posts: 425	Tue 08/14/12 10:41 AM


poppashroom Joined Tue 06/28/11 Posts: 425	Tue 08/14/12 10:42 AM
What price the spoils of war?...Enjoyed this very much Rich! Always happy you read ,

poppashroom Joined Tue 06/28/11 Posts: 425	Tue 08/14/12 10:43 AM
Interesting how interpret things I feel

Ladywind7 Joined Sun 04/08/12 Posts: 7833	Tue 08/14/12 12:45 PM
Interesting how interpret things I feel I know. I think poetic people see and feel things so differently. Like btw :-)

poppashroom Joined Tue 06/28/11 Posts: 425	Tue 08/14/12 12:51 PM
Interesting how interpret things I feel I know. I think poetic people see and feel things so differently. Like btw :-) Thanking you, and my brain seems to forget to put things in the right order at times. I meant Interesting how things are interpreted in many ways. Curious I have always found. But most enjoyable to read others as they read and write, so much fun

ShugahBee Joined Mon 07/23/12 Posts: 241	Tue 08/14/12 02:44 PM Edited by ShugahBee on Tue 08/14/12 02:50 PM
It is a good poem you write very well ,I enjoy reading all you write. I like how you worded it Your poem reminded me of this saying.The world would be a better place if everyone treated other's how they want to be treated. Blessings ƸӁƷ Harmony

poppashroom Joined Tue 06/28/11 Posts: 425	Tue 08/14/12 03:11 PM
It is a good poem you write very well ,I enjoy reading all you write. I like how you worded it Your poem reminded me of this saying.The world would be a better place if everyone treated other's how they want to be treated. Blessings ƸӁƷ Harmony I thank you for connecting,

looking2_C Joined Wed 08/08/12 Posts: 38	Tue 08/14/12 04:55 PM
Very well written

poppashroom Joined Tue 06/28/11 Posts: 425	Wed 08/15/12 08:14 AM
Very well written Thank you for reading

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