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Topic: ~sunshine
teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Sun 08/12/12 05:53 AM
i put my hair up only to have you pull it down you fill my head with distractions and my mouth with your tongue trust me, you say while you turn my back to you and lifting my hair kiss me there he calls me sunshine he whispers in my ear you better miss me everything of me misses everything of him he calls me sunshine

tazzops Joined Sat 12/20/08 Posts: 33333	Sun 08/12/12 06:59 AM


bastet126 Joined Fri 12/07/07 Posts: 15553	Sun 08/12/12 08:36 AM
so many things conveyed, in so few words, oh i just love this tb!! :)

Up2Us Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 3926	Sun 08/12/12 06:21 PM
so many things conveyed, in so few words, oh i just love this tb!! :) Uhm.... Wow...

pennyg281 Joined Thu 11/08/07 Posts: 4348	Sun 08/12/12 06:37 PM
I really liked this :) awesome write

ShugahBee Joined Mon 07/23/12 Posts: 241	Sun 08/12/12 06:45 PM
A Very lovely poem hun

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Mon 08/13/12 12:25 PM
tazztops.. bastet126...!thankyou! Up2Us..does that mean you like it?... pennyg281....thankyou,kindly ShugahBee...thankyou so much

Ainjel Joined Sat 01/24/09 Posts: 3610	Mon 08/13/12 02:23 PM
Love it tb..In so few words there is plenty..

Up2Us Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 3926	Mon 08/13/12 03:56 PM Edited by Up2Us on Mon 08/13/12 03:57 PM
Up2Us..does that mean you like it?... Yes, sunshine..... .

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Mon 08/13/12 04:10 PM
Ainjel...you are always very generous with me. Up2Us...awww..that's all i have..awww.

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Mon 08/13/12 05:12 PM


creativesoul Joined Mon 04/16/07 Posts: 9166	Mon 08/13/12 06:00 PM
Fantastic style.

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Mon 08/13/12 06:28 PM
kc...no words....smile. creativesoul...like your comment...

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