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Edited by
tayah12
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Sun 08/05/12 07:49 PM
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The loving, honest, faithful one
He who is forgiving, deserving, unwavering The man who sees her flaws Standing firm unwilling to withdraw He who sees past the flesh For his wisdom revels that beauty is just natures fleeing mirage Master of his craft with keen eyes that pierce The carefully hidden secrets that took years to obtain The one who effortlessly dissolves the shadows That once ravaged, horrified, distorted her She seeks to find this man The one from the fairytales in a childhood passed She still believes she'll find this man The nobleman, the knight |
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Excellent write.......
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Edited by
mig25
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Mon 08/06/12 12:11 AM
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tayah tayah tayah . . . this is is truly a wonderfuil poem.
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So rare ..and raw and true..I want this Man, like no other.
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Excelent
There are still a few of us knights out here.... |
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The loving, honest, faithful one He who is forgiving, deserving, unwavering The man who sees her flaws Standing firm unwilling to withdraw He who sees past the flesh For his wisdom revels that beauty is just natures fleeing mirage Master of his craft with keen eyes that pierce The carefully hidden secrets that took years to obtain The one who effortlessly dissolves the shadows That once ravaged, horrified, distorted her She seeks to find this man The one from the fairytales in a childhood passed She still believes she'll find this man The nobleman, the knight This is a stunner Tay!..."The one who effortlessly dissolves the shadows" is a book within one sentence...WOW! |
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The loving, honest, faithful one He who is forgiving, deserving, unwavering The man who sees her flaws Standing firm unwilling to withdraw He who sees past the flesh For his wisdom revels that beauty is just natures fleeing mirage Master of his craft with keen eyes that pierce The carefully hidden secrets that took years to obtain The one who effortlessly dissolves the shadows That once ravaged, horrified, distorted her She seeks to find this man The one from the fairytales in a childhood passed She still believes she'll find this man The nobleman, the knight This is a stunner Tay!..."The one who effortlessly dissolves the shadows" is a book within one sentence...WOW! I completely agree with my friend here, this was very good. |
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