Topic: She seeks to find this man
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Sun 08/05/12 07:48 PM
Edited by tayah12 on Sun 08/05/12 07:49 PM
The loving, honest, faithful one
He who is forgiving, deserving, unwavering
The man who sees her flaws
Standing firm unwilling to withdraw
He who sees past the flesh
For his wisdom revels that beauty is just natures fleeing mirage

Master of his craft with keen eyes that pierce
The carefully hidden secrets that took years to obtain
The one who effortlessly dissolves the shadows
That once ravaged, horrified, distorted her

She seeks to find this man
The one from the fairytales in a childhood passed
She still believes she'll find this man
The nobleman, the knight

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Sun 08/05/12 09:28 PM
Excellent write.......smokin flowerforyou

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Mon 08/06/12 12:11 AM
Edited by mig25 on Mon 08/06/12 12:11 AM
tayah tayah tayah . . . this is is truly a wonderfuil poem.

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Thu 09/06/12 09:17 AM
So rare ..and raw and true..I want this Man, like no other.
drinker flowerforyou :heart:





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Thu 09/06/12 09:23 AM
:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

Phuque2's photo
Thu 09/06/12 09:26 AM
Excelent

There are still a few of us knights out here....

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Thu 09/06/12 09:58 AM

The loving, honest, faithful one
He who is forgiving, deserving, unwavering
The man who sees her flaws
Standing firm unwilling to withdraw
He who sees past the flesh
For his wisdom revels that beauty is just natures fleeing mirage

Master of his craft with keen eyes that pierce
The carefully hidden secrets that took years to obtain
The one who effortlessly dissolves the shadows
That once ravaged, horrified, distorted her

She seeks to find this man
The one from the fairytales in a childhood passed
She still believes she'll find this man
The nobleman, the knight


This is a stunner Tay!..."The one who effortlessly dissolves the shadows" is a book within one sentence...WOW!flowerforyou

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Thu 09/06/12 10:06 AM


The loving, honest, faithful one
He who is forgiving, deserving, unwavering
The man who sees her flaws
Standing firm unwilling to withdraw
He who sees past the flesh
For his wisdom revels that beauty is just natures fleeing mirage

Master of his craft with keen eyes that pierce
The carefully hidden secrets that took years to obtain
The one who effortlessly dissolves the shadows
That once ravaged, horrified, distorted her

She seeks to find this man
The one from the fairytales in a childhood passed
She still believes she'll find this man
The nobleman, the knight


This is a stunner Tay!..."The one who effortlessly dissolves the shadows" is a book within one sentence...WOW!flowerforyou


I completely agree with my friend here, this was very good.