Topic: the true devil
jimz's photo
Thu 08/02/07 04:31 PM
the red face of man
the true devil
and his guns and kicking legs
and his eye bombs and sore muscles
the true devil
his fake love and his wired hate
and his greed like hail falling from the sun
the true devil

the ironing board of the paper land
the true hell

the iron pushed by clothed souls
while their blood is boiling

true sin

inside the metal skin of man
there is a world

man is inside his world
and does not know how he got there

behind his evil
he washes the silent void
that writes his lie
or else he would die
a true devil
inside a hell
where he possesses himself

lulu24's photo
Thu 08/02/07 09:25 PM
very powerful.

LAMom's photo
Thu 08/02/07 09:41 PM
Powerful indeed and thought provoking,,,

pkh's photo
Fri 08/03/07 04:26 AM
very powerful inded,I can relate to that one.flowerforyou

sweetcountrygirl's photo
Fri 08/03/07 11:00 AM
so true jimz...
good depiction here...flowerforyou

TxsGal3333's photo
Sat 08/04/07 05:03 AM
Very deep but very well put bigsmile