Your face hidden
tantalising
amongst the thin
layers of lace
that lay between us

I rise to my
tiptoes to grasp
a glimpse
of the pink face
that lay
before me

Patience cast aside
I fly
I rise
To behold the beauty
of you

You smile
hidden
shy
but even
half of you
reflects the Sun
eclipsed never

Velvet sheets
whispers of cotton
lay beneath us

Stars
Oh the stars
pencil our future
and trace our past
they rest above

For some moments
I am high
high as deep can be
to see how you
light up the night

We come to rest
our faces red
as we chased
the Sun
round the Earth

Subtle, erotic, sexy, and sweet...Very nice

Thank you Vicki,

Smiles to write ,

hi!..good to read your work again...is it just me?, or men are definitely more emotional,sensual and passionate when writing poems?..god! when you write,.you use heart as a pen and lovesweat as the ink...result?..a work that lingers on its own...excellent,. Rich...

You pay such compliments, I thank you, my heart is true

feels like a favorite blanket, very nice! i really
like "I am high ...high as deep can be"

Thank you for reading, I always feel honoured by your words