Topic: you deserve it
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Sat 07/21/12 09:21 PM
the dj plays
shitty music

the 40 something year old man
next to me
in the table opposite
doesn't know
if he flicks one more ****ing pop-top
i'll grab him by the skull and break his frontal lobe

i have tried to be a gentle man
they want none of it

i'm losing it.
go ahead.
when i needed protection you offered
nothing.


lock me up.
i'm ready
for
necessary
injustice.

Down2earthdebbie's photo
Sat 07/21/12 09:51 PM
Where you been? :wink:

no photo
Sat 07/21/12 10:01 PM
"..i'm losing it.
go ahead.
when i needed protection you offered
nothing.."

I like this..

mig25's photo
Sun 07/22/12 02:51 AM

the dj plays
shitty music

the 40 something year old man
next to me
in the table opposite
doesn't know
if he flicks one more ****ing pop-top
i'll grab him by the skull and break his frontal lobe

i have tried to be a gentle man
they want none of it

i'm losing it.
go ahead.
when i needed protection you offered
nothing.

I like this poem . . . I really like it.
lock me up.
i'm ready
for
necessary
injustice.