Topic: the dating sea
jimz's photo
Wed 08/01/07 03:20 PM
pirates on the strip ship
throwing lines of fake bait
throwing themselves
in shallow water

the waves separate
the wind prepares the boiling solitude

the fog hides the inner man
and his robbery of his own ship

they follow in the storm
of emotions

the war for love on the sea
is crowded with ships

circling like sharks
but the sharks
are circling the ships

and when they meet
sh*t happens

LAMom's photo
Wed 08/01/07 07:42 PM
WoW !!! I really like this one,,, flowerforyou

TxsGal3333's photo
Wed 08/01/07 08:58 PM
jimz very good , humm kinda sounds like JSH flowerforyou

jimz's photo
Thu 08/02/07 02:21 PM
No TxsGal, at least not on the poetry pages, I consider alot women here just friends, but when I fall in love again, I won't be on the dating sea, I'll be swimming in the sky, where you have to hold on to someone, or you'll fall

sweetcountrygirl's photo
Fri 08/03/07 07:57 AM
beautiful..
:heart: :heart: :heart:

frankfk's photo
Fri 08/03/07 08:30 AM
love love everywhere but not a warm to feel it, sweet wordingflowerforyou :smile:

pkh's photo
Fri 08/03/07 01:03 PM
Really enjoyed this one.:smile: