Topic: Why I Loved Her!
hot_engine620's photo
Wed 07/18/12 05:47 AM
If questioning would make us wise No eyes would ever gaze in eyes; If all our tale were told in speech No mouths would wander each to each.

Were spirits free from mortal mesh And love not bound in hearts of flesh No aching breasts would yearn to meet And find their ecstasy complete.

For who is there that lives and knows The secret powers by which he grows? Were knowledge all, what were our need To thrill and faint and sweetly bleed?

Then seek not, sweet, the "If" and "Why" I love you now until
I die. For I must love because I live And life in me is what you give.flowerforyou :smile:

Kaleijoscope's photo
Wed 07/18/12 07:10 AM
i love it,especially the last phrase...thank you for sharing!

hot_engine620's photo
Wed 07/18/12 07:53 AM
UR WELCOME :smile:

bastet126's photo
Thu 07/19/12 06:04 PM
Edited by bastet126 on Thu 07/19/12 06:11 PM
red_engine, these are beautiful prose, but the original
author should be noted.

hot_engine620's photo
Thu 07/19/12 07:51 PM

red_engine, these are beautiful prose, but the original
author should be noted.

Thnx firstly its hot_engine nt red:tongue:
n secondly its nt from one book.... its edited n few lines r mine so dnt go for the authors coz its not copied one but edited one....:tongue: :smile:

HeadnHeart's photo
Thu 07/19/12 09:30 PM


red_engine, these are beautiful prose, but the original
author should be noted.

Thnx firstly its hot_engine nt red:tongue:
n secondly its nt from one book.... its edited n few lines r mine so dnt go for the authors coz its not copied one but edited one....:tongue: :smile:


She is still correct, that's considered plagiarism. (look it up)

Or you could change your profile name to vanilla ice_engine?


hot_engine620's photo
Thu 07/19/12 09:38 PM



red_engine, these are beautiful prose, but the original
author should be noted.

Thnx firstly its hot_engine nt red:tongue:
n secondly its nt from one book.... its edited n few lines r mine so dnt go for the authors coz its not copied one but edited one....:tongue: :smile:


She is still correct, that's considered plagiarism. (look it up)

Or you could change your profile name to vanilla ice_engine?




Girls always seem correct to despos like u change ur profile name to despoheart

Ladywind7's photo
Thu 07/19/12 10:31 PM
Despos? Head n heart is not a despo! And you are not vanilla ice. Lmho here. Read the forum rules hot_engine. You are being naughty here. bigsmile

HeadnHeart's photo
Thu 07/19/12 11:56 PM




red_engine, these are beautiful prose, but the original
author should be noted.

Thnx firstly its hot_engine nt red:tongue:
n secondly its nt from one book.... its edited n few lines r mine so dnt go for the authors coz its not copied one but edited one....:tongue: :smile:


She is still correct, that's considered plagiarism. (look it up)

Or you could change your profile name to vanilla ice_engine?




Girls always seem correct to despos like u change ur profile name to despoheart


Ok, so he's not a poet or comedian...

I see that you play guitar, I'm assuming. Let's say that you write your own music even. Later you become famous because of what you create.

Is it good, if someone changes it a little and then claims it as their own...

You will loose your respect as a creator. Hence, as vanilla ice did with queens song.

It's your choice my friend.

Ps. Thanks ladywind...

hot_engine620's photo
Fri 07/20/12 03:06 AM





red_engine, these are beautiful prose, but the original
author should be noted.

Thnx firstly its hot_engine nt red:tongue:
n secondly its nt from one book.... its edited n few lines r mine so dnt go for the authors coz its not copied one but edited one....:tongue: :smile:


She is still correct, that's considered plagiarism. (look it up)

Or you could change your profile name to vanilla ice_engine?




I m nt claiming that i am a writer or what.... jst pisted a poem added few lines as i felt they could match .... nthng else... i liked it n posted.... thats it...

Girls always seem correct to despos like u change ur profile name to despoheart


Ok, so he's not a poet or comedian...

I see that you play guitar, I'm assuming. Let's say that you write your own music even. Later you become famous because of what you create.

Is it good, if someone changes it a little and then claims it as their own...

You will loose your respect as a creator. Hence, as vanilla ice did with queens song.

It's your choice my friend.

Ps. Thanks ladywind...

hot_engine620's photo
Fri 07/20/12 03:06 AM





red_engine, these are beautiful prose, but the original
author should be noted.

Thnx firstly its hot_engine nt red:tongue:
n secondly its nt from one book.... its edited n few lines r mine so dnt go for the authors coz its not copied one but edited one....:tongue: :smile:


She is still correct, that's considered plagiarism. (look it up)

Or you could change your profile name to vanilla ice_engine?




I m nt claiming that i am a writer or what.... jst pisted a poem added few lines as i felt they could match .... nthng else... i liked it n posted.... thats it...

Girls always seem correct to despos like u change ur profile name to despoheart


Ok, so he's not a poet or comedian...

I see that you play guitar, I'm assuming. Let's say that you write your own music even. Later you become famous because of what you create.

Is it good, if someone changes it a little and then claims it as their own...

You will loose your respect as a creator. Hence, as vanilla ice did with queens song.

It's your choice my friend.

Ps. Thanks ladywind...