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Sat 07/07/12 01:49 AM
ready”

I take one last breath
to fight off fate
as my eyes struggle
to trace the lines
where slow drops of hope
flow into my soul

The steady beep
angers me
because it’s my last vestige of life
it is all that I have
it is all that I am now
I hate its sound
I hate how it interrupts
the silence I do not want to hear
I hate how it reminds me
that there no more memories
no more tomorrows


“Oh God help me; I am not . . .



poppashroom's photo
Sat 07/07/12 02:04 AM
Steady beat
Lines tell me
Faltering feet
Alone I see

One last phone
Call
I'm not in jail
Life leaves me
To fall
One last hail

Souls flow free
Wish someone
Would see

Talk to me

Too late
Too far
A different state
Now I'm a star


Good write mig
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Sat 07/07/12 05:45 AM
:cry:

This one took me back to another time...Very nice Mig...flowerforyou
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Sat 07/07/12 09:33 AM
I do enjoy the words. Thank you for sharing.

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Sun 07/08/12 09:16 PM
You have an amazing way with words Mig..Always a pleasure to read your Work...
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Mon 07/09/12 04:49 PM
mig, wow, and love what you did with the title and the ending... flowerforyou
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Fri 07/13/12 12:51 AM

mig, wow, and love what you did with the title and the ending... flowerforyou


Thanks Bas and Ainjel . . . You know you two always inspire me
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Fri 07/13/12 04:09 AM
Edited by Up2Us on Fri 07/13/12 04:10 AM


Excellent write....smokin

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