I lost my sis in a deadly cancer attack a while back, And this is what I wrote after settling down the trauma...

Sitting in darkness on a bench,
alone; i was shivering from cold
when; i see a piercing white light from d oak tree growing bold.
And i swift back in time when we walked along the shores with your warm hand in mine
when i saw everything glowing hard like your smile.

Once again, the white birds from heavens of past have come in dark skies.
Once again, I can feel wind blowing high and waves splashing by.
I still remember the sparrows chanting over the trees and meteors in the skies of evening
as we were floating in the gold ocean water glittering and glowing...
And then the way we sank into warm waves over shallow ends to ocean beds.
Your eyes sparkling in the rainbow, sparkling under water and wavy skies
Our feet entangled around each other
and when our thoughts were mysteries I'd see your face wrapped in 7 coloured shys.

Like a fairy tale is told,
things around us took the shape of that mould.
But soon was to come the sad part of tale
who knew that the smiles would turn into hails....

And so now here i sit, under your twilight which never ends
cuz d sun of our world never sets,
it just remains above horizon
even after you ran away far from my vision

You disappeared from my life like a flower blown away by gails
Now the tears in my eyes paint the evening sky from pink to grey

Even the sparrows sit quietly o'er the bench where we used to sit, as they are feeling the air stale
The water's nomore beautyful of the ocean beds, it always shows brown colour or goes pale
and the trees dat used to dance when with each other we used to play, are now still as the air is stale.
please come back in this world as your absence itches everybody, the whole world has gone stale.

Everbody needs you, every1 loves you. y u kild urslf thnkn no 1 loves you?
Not even once you thot about me about your family????
please come back over here as i wanna live the dead ecstasy........

its lovely

Thnx buddy... :D

Aman what a beautiful eulogy to your sister!...Only raw emotion, honesty, and love can create sentences like these.....

"I see a piercing white light from the oak tree growing bold...and I swift back in time"

"when our thoughts were mysteries I'd see your face wrapped in 7 coloured shys"...

"Please come back over here as I want to live the dead ecstasy"....



Thank you for sharing, I'm sorry for your loss...

i agree totally with leigh, and just want to add that i was
also captured in the line:

'And so now here i sit, under your twilight which never ends'

thanks for sharing, your sister was surely special.
i hope to read more from you!

Yes. me too Bastet....I love that line..."under your twilight which never ends"...amazing write!!

The depth of our love determines the depth of our grief. Your sister was loved and that is a gift you gave to her. Hugs.

Oh thanks both of you... And, ya leigh, she was evrything to me... I was literally crying writing this... :) I am delighted to know that someone likes it... :D

A great write, truly shared,

Thnx buddy... :D