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Topic: Fragments
oldhippie1952 Joined Mon 03/14/11 Posts: 22693	Mon 06/25/12 09:51 PM
I've never tried to write a poem like this before. It just sorta squirted out of my fingers. Forgive me if it is worse than my usual prose. Fragments Sublime Messages hurt When spoken with Cold and cruel barren voice. Passion Ignites anew Fires long dormant With their inflamed world voice. Magic Brief, fleeting Lights the path Trod upon for other worldly voice.

Ladywind7 Joined Sun 04/08/12 Posts: 7833	Tue 06/26/12 01:57 AM Edited by Ladywind7 on Tue 06/26/12 02:40 AM
Trully a great poem. We rise, we fall. Hurts like hell too. Hugs from your sister in Christ.

tazzops Joined Sat 12/20/08 Posts: 33333	Tue 06/26/12 09:02 AM


poppashroom Joined Tue 06/28/11 Posts: 425	Tue 06/26/12 02:52 PM
It's a nice style

PacificStar48 Joined Tue 10/02/07 Posts: 13764	Tue 06/26/12 10:06 PM
Well Done!!!

jemare Joined Fri 04/24/09 Posts: 2105	Fri 06/29/12 07:34 AM
a good read Hippie

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