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Topic: spinning grey
bastet126 Joined Fri 12/07/07 Posts: 15553	Tue 06/12/12 07:29 PM
i walked the path a thousand times, in my mind. and swam, in raging waters, until upon the shore, i lay. sunburned and parched from my time, spinning grey, the sand made bed to my worn out soul. the moon awakened. sleep stood still upon my tired eyes, and your name found its breath upon my whisper. ~ks 2012

tazzops Joined Sat 12/20/08 Posts: 33333	Tue 06/12/12 07:31 PM


poppashroom Joined Tue 06/28/11 Posts: 425	Tue 06/12/12 11:08 PM
Beauty x

Up2Us Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 3926	Wed 06/13/12 01:07 AM
Very nice write......

EveningCrow Joined Thu 06/07/12 Posts: 7	Wed 06/13/12 01:24 AM
shhhhhhhhh closing my eyes and let it sink in... real nice...some how soothing... "and your name found its breath upon my whisper. " hugs

Ainjel Joined Sat 01/24/09 Posts: 3610	Wed 06/13/12 02:35 AM
Bastet, always an awesome read..

2KidsMom Joined Tue 09/30/08 Posts: 58206	Wed 06/13/12 06:27 AM
Nice to see you...always a good read.

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Wed 06/13/12 07:55 AM
romantic

bastet126 Joined Fri 12/07/07 Posts: 15553	Wed 06/13/12 05:56 PM
oh gosh, THANK YOU ALL!! i like to individually thank people, for taking the time to read and comment, but, today, a group hug sounds nice :) thanks again, i really do appreciate it, always!!!

jemare Joined Fri 04/24/09 Posts: 2105	Fri 06/15/12 10:20 AM
A wonderful read

Hurricat Joined Sat 06/02/12 Posts: 96	Fri 06/15/12 10:24 AM
Superb..

bastet126 Joined Fri 12/07/07 Posts: 15553	Fri 06/15/12 05:26 PM
jemare, hurricat, you're the best, thank you!

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