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Let me walk through the maze called life,does anyone want to be my next path in life of friendship?
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Life is what happens to you, while you're busy making other plans.-J. Lennon
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So very true,and again life isn't life without true friends to walk the path of learning.
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Let me walk through the maze called life,does anyone want to be my next path in life of friendship? I am sorry, I don't mean to be mean or anything, but this sounds like you walk all over your friends. ("(someone who) want(s) to be (your) next path".) |
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Edited by
wux
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Tue 06/05/12 08:15 AM
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Please forgive me, OP, and don't mind me. I am critical because I just finished writing a post in another thread in which I explained how important it is to avoid awkward or sloppy compositions.
Nothing personal about you, please don't get mad at me. I am just in a set mood of "needing to correct", so I'll log off now until I feel better again. |
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Edited by
simplemanwanting
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Tue 06/05/12 08:32 AM
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next path meaning a new section of my life including better class of friends worth calling friends.,the people I thought were my friends walked all over me and it was my fault for letting it happen.So I would like to meet new people who think of others as they would want to be thought of.
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