Topic: The First
mig25's photo
Sun 05/20/12 01:41 AM
The First


Autumn’s first leaf
drifted through the days melancholy
as if it were searching
for what wasn’t there
but should have been

Maybe it was the sun’s presence
that was missing
or the ground was too far
a fall
but something wasn’t right
something was missing

Autumn’s first leaf
floated through the cool air
like a lonely soul
searching for someone
just to talk to
someone who would listen
to a thought or a dream

Maybe it was you
that was missing
or maybe life was just too much
for me to walk alone
but once you have that first kiss
the last one
always leaves you searching



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Sun 05/20/12 04:22 AM
Beautiful Mig..

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Sun 05/20/12 05:07 AM
drinker :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

bastet126's photo
Mon 05/21/12 05:11 PM
how true is that!! very nice mig flowerforyou

pennyg281's photo
Tue 05/22/12 07:48 AM
Very nice writeflowerforyou

poppashroom's photo
Thu 05/24/12 01:52 PM
Always nice to read you

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Thu 05/24/12 01:56 PM
Mig, I read this three times and I still want more....Thanks for sharing, it's beautiful...flowerforyou

mig25's photo
Sat 05/26/12 02:21 AM

Mig, I read this three times and I still want more....Thanks for sharing, it's beautiful...flowerforyou


Leigh2154, thanks . . . who knows, there may be another poem in the works.

Ainjel, poppa, penny, bas, and taz . . . you all know you make me feel like as if I'm a pretty good poet so thanks so much.

and bas, i love that short poem of yours


kc0003's photo
Sat 05/26/12 01:12 PM
mig...drinker

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Sat 05/26/12 09:30 PM
Excellent write......drinker smokin

mig25's photo
Sun 05/27/12 02:37 AM

Excellent write......drinker smokin


Yep, now I have a big head . . . thanks
and kc0003, you know I have to thank you too