Topic: quiet shout
poppashroom's photo
Sun 05/13/12 02:26 PM
Like a lion I roar,
Sad as stone I soar
Voice heard
unheard hush
Trees fall silent
Great whispered crash
Left memory
Just space

bastet126's photo
Sun 05/13/12 03:44 PM
i really like this, i truly do. something deep lays within
its short metaphoric verse, i feel it's purpose intently.
nicely done poppashroom :)

no photo
Sun 05/13/12 04:20 PM

Like a lion I roar,
Sad as stone I soar
Voice heard
unheard hush
Trees fall silent
Great whispered crash
Left memory
Just space



I like it too...love it actually:smile: ...More than a metaphor, it is a metaphor within metaphors....Happy and fullfilled meets melancholy and empty time and time again...How good this is!!!!!flowerforyou