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Topic: as i grow old
insangel Joined Thu 11/03/11 Posts: 258	Fri 04/20/12 06:41 PM
I have walked lifes many lanes, crossed my bridges as they flamed, i've been a hero, played the fool, I've been a villain & I've been a saint too, I've been loved & I've been hated, I've been over & under rated I've been a liar I've told the truth either way I've paid my dues I've been in hot water, left out in the cold I've been a rebel who does what he's told. i have walked through the avenues of all my old point of views & i see the dreams i use to hold change in me as i grow old

mig25 Joined Sun 08/10/08 Posts: 1537	Fri 04/20/12 06:55 PM
I have walked lifes many lanes, crossed my bridges as they flamed, i've been a hero, played the fool, I've been a villain & I've been a saint too, I've been loved & I've been hated, I've been over & under rated I've been a liar I've told the truth either way I've paid my dues I've been in hot water, left out in the cold I've been a rebel who does what he's told. i have walked through the avenues of all my old point of views & i see the dreams i use to hold change in me as i grow old Ah, this says it all. Aging is both a blessing and burden but life, well, life is great.

insangel Joined Thu 11/03/11 Posts: 258	Fri 04/20/12 06:57 PM


pennyg281 Joined Thu 11/08/07 Posts: 4348	Fri 04/20/12 10:19 PM
Awesome write

insangel Joined Thu 11/03/11 Posts: 258	Sat 04/21/12 09:45 AM
Awesome write thank u:)

jemare Joined Fri 04/24/09 Posts: 2105	Sat 04/21/12 10:38 AM Edited by jemare on Sat 04/21/12 10:39 AM
Yes....How we handle what life throws us on a daily basis... changes daily. Good write

insangel Joined Thu 11/03/11 Posts: 258	Sat 04/21/12 04:06 PM
Yes....How we handle what life throws us on a daily basis... changes daily. Good write thank u

Peekinin Joined Mon 03/17/08 Posts: 4970	Sat 04/21/12 05:00 PM
A voice to my thoughts Thank you for sharing

insangel Joined Thu 11/03/11 Posts: 258	Sat 04/21/12 05:49 PM
A voice to my thoughts Thank you for sharing

Smallpebble Joined Mon 01/31/11 Posts: 29	Sat 04/21/12 09:20 PM
Thank You . Is it You or me you write about ? or just getting older ?

insangel Joined Thu 11/03/11 Posts: 258	Sun 04/22/12 02:09 PM
Thank You . Is it You or me you write about ? or just getting older ?

619sofine Joined Sat 04/21/12 Posts: 16	Sun 04/22/12 02:36 PM
some really powerful prose.......

insangel Joined Thu 11/03/11 Posts: 258	Sun 04/22/12 07:59 PM
some really powerful prose.......

poppashroom Joined Tue 06/28/11 Posts: 425	Sat 06/23/12 10:57 AM
It says you are who you are, each line being a neutral by the end, I enjoyed that

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