Topic: 24 Female Single n Living in MELBOURNE,AUSTRALIA. | |
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Hey all just wanted to see who would rate my profile n also if any1 could give me some hints,tips or general feedback on how I could improve it ...Cheers :) x
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Hey all just wanted to see who would rate my profile n also if any1 could give me some hints,tips or general feedback on how I could improve it ...Cheers :) x Hiya Rezza, A nice proile and good pics...the only comment that I would make is that it says lots and lots (verging on TMI) about you and virtually nothing about the person you're hoping to meet. Welcome to the site and good luck in your search. |
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Edited by
83bronco
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Sun 04/15/12 12:10 PM
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A lil too much info all at once. Keep it short, leave the reader wanting to know more. Keeping the content a bit more simple will allow readers that may be a lil shy open the conversation with more basic questions and you may get more responses from that. Pics look great, maybe add a few full body shots. Over all good read, you seem really cool. Good luck
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