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Topic: Dying While Living
mig25 Joined Sun 08/10/08 Posts: 1537	Sun 02/26/12 12:52 AM
Dying While Living My ego has long since vanished to the ages thinned bald and sick It’s not the pain anymore it’s still there but the thoughts that are killing me slowly I don’t take the time to reminiscence because life beckons me onward to death

bastet126 Joined Fri 12/07/07 Posts: 15553	Sun 02/26/12 07:55 AM
this left me sad, and empty. when a write can leave us where the author spoke from, and we walk for just a moment in their thoughts, that's what creative writing is all about. very felt mig

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Sun 02/26/12 08:21 AM
This is short,,and still very powerful,,and in that..its perfect!

2KidsMom Joined Tue 09/30/08 Posts: 58206	Mon 02/27/12 10:50 AM
Heartfelt

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