A/N: Don't read if you don't like vulgarity & please don't criticize. My writings are my true soul and my true feelings. It helps to write to get the emotions out of me*


I still hold all this hate inside
this resentment i can never hide
i had wished you would die
but it was me who died instead inside
you took my soul
and everyhting i had known
you traded your family for a new one
how could you do that to your newborn
but now you have another one
tell me is she better than yourt first born?
im so disgusted
I wish i could just get over it
and let you go
but that's what love does
it grabs you and never lets go
this pain is old
im just immune to it
I hate when you call me
& hear you say
"i love you" to your new bi*ch
Your such a prick
you do things out of spite
just to cause us to fight
they were always right
you're nothing but a loser, your worthless
just the way i wasted my time, its bull ****
you know exactly what to do to piss me off
then you go home to your bi*ch and get your rocks off
i still wish you would die
call me what you will, but you're the cruelest man alive
just take your shot gun and load it
put it to your head
and bite the bullet....

Hell yes. Beautiful.

Such true raw emotions. someti mes writing is the best way to release them.

Nice poem. It kind of made me think of "Stay Away" by Heavens to Betsy. You should check it out sometime, maybe you'll find it relatable. Just a warning, there is some screaming so headphones might be recommended.

Thanks you guys. & yes that song is really good i can relate to it, i like the lyrics but the girls voice is something to get used to lol. I do like it tho.

TELL-IT like it is woman,,stand-up and be YOU!!
I LOVE IT!!!!!! Haven't seen ya for a while here Jamie,,but glad your back at writing,,

Thankyou, i had to sort some things out with my life but it does feel good to be writing again.

Great darkness>>>