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Topic: ~ you cry because...
teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Tue 02/21/12 12:05 PM
i thought i could save you it may have worked if you had wanted it i watched you drowning each life line i threw the demons ate the love i gave the demons ate then You ate my tenderheart and i was no more now you eat parts of the spaceship that fills your fridge big pieces,little pieces bit by bit and at the end of the day you cry because eating a spaceship is hard to do and your demons watch you

tazzops Joined Sat 12/20/08 Posts: 33333	Tue 02/21/12 12:06 PM


jemare Joined Fri 04/24/09 Posts: 2105	Tue 02/21/12 01:54 PM
So relatable, very nice write

thewaterbearer Joined Sun 10/25/09 Posts: 19759	Tue 02/21/12 01:59 PM
Love the write

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Thu 02/23/12 09:18 AM
tazztops... jemare... thewaterbearer... thankyou for reading teasingbrunette

manOfewwords Joined Wed 10/22/08 Posts: 29908	Thu 02/23/12 01:28 PM


iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Thu 02/23/12 08:23 PM
SOME,,can take all,,,Nice write teasin..

pennyg281 Joined Thu 11/08/07 Posts: 4348	Fri 02/24/12 12:29 AM
Very nice

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