Topic: Memories,-~`-~`-~`-~`-~`
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Fri 02/17/12 11:47 PM
Please,unscrew me, un-use me.
Make me fresh,
and new.
Excite me, delight me,
Take back those words.
we're through.
Please me, squeeze me,
Just like,
you use to do.
Lift my head,
out of the toilet.
remove the embedded bullet.
Place it back into
the chamber.
Then kiss me back alive,
To all I remember.brokenheart

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Sat 02/18/12 08:41 AM
Damn T, this is hard to read!!...I'm loving the first half...Then BANG!!....Suicide is never the answer...Know why?.....It's too hard on the ones we leave behind, too selfish....flowerforyou :heart: flowerforyou

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Sat 02/18/12 09:00 AM

Damn T, this is hard to read!!...I'm loving the first half...Then BANG!!....Suicide is never the answer...Know why?.....It's too hard on the ones we leave behind, too selfish....flowerforyou :heart: flowerforyou
Leigh,,does that mean you like it or don't like it,lol
I was trying very hard to make a person's depth of truma within them,,as like,,this was a note left behind,,,BUT,,in its self,,just a
passing thought in their mind to be having,,as to this nature..?
In other words,,it was WRITTEN to take you to this person's sadness and dispare,,it could NEVER be any form of my thoughts to think,,as real.