so here i am
with an open beer and closed remote
the tv is my breathing heart
to a ****ing broken throat

i know i swear too much
don't even ****in' know
shitty days with your father
make a ***** hard to slow
down
it's the same sound
giraffes make when they
chokin' down

yeah, turn it up 'cause my soul is low
the devil drank a beer and then he let me go
so even duality failed me just so you know
i couldn't give a **** about the ghost you ******* call a soul

sometimes when i sneeze i bite my tongue
i guess that's the best way to shut me up
just stop my heart for a second like
a broken orgasm
phantasm of ****ed up feelings
it's fine to break to the sentence harder
than a turgid shawshank victim
i'll kill myself and my lover 'cause she's ****in' with him

pull up an idea and then bury your dick
my cock is a non-stop killer and it's sick
if SA had coins for 20 seconds sober
i'd still be sitting with old-*** freaks gettin' one over

my wrist is slit
it's finally ****ing vertical
reality's a lie
but i try to ****in' convert it though

i'm a mess
pale flesh and open scales
snake skin swallowed in a rabbit suit
on ****in sails
and when everything i love
eventually fails
i'll call those naive PETA mother****ers
till i get a deal

money has never been real
so i don't understand it
play wheel of fortune like russian roulette
-here's the gun, i'll hand it-
to myself, so i can stop these broken ****in' pipedreams
i'm like luigi when he feeds himself so many mushrooms that he use his life for pay

i'll send my life away
you have no understanding
elliott, it's 5:30 AM and I can't ****in' stand it
don't have the knife, a pretty girl to **** me over - can it
i swallow lifestyles like a drunken crocodile - i'm too candid

it's easy enough to make a joke 'bout the homeless
until you own this style of sorrow then you know that you're a formless
and tantric prick trapped in a Vick's Vapo-Rub of ****ing warmness
well, here's your warning -

my soul is ****in illiterate.

Overkill, just like some otherwise excellent movies I've seen...

you know this is right up my alley and even though i’ve read this a couple of times, i’m not really sure how to respond to it.

i like the idea and there are several lines that just jerk me to attention (can’t be a bad thing). i guess i find too many things to relate to here...

Not as pulling IN,,,as most of what you have did,,

On a scale of YOU,,I'd give this one a five,,just saying as a me thing for you to have an idea? But it still rocks as for it depth of person speaking,,yet is smooth and not TAKING YOU INTO IT MUCH.

Hope that helps ya,,