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Topic: jealously....
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Mon 02/06/12 07:16 AM
jealously

I thought I knew
people who
claimed to be
one with me…

think you did too
but truth not true…

Hit the wall, don't fall...

but
if
you
do
I'll
catch
you…

and
I
know
you'll
catch
me
toO…:heart:
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Mon 02/06/12 07:30 AM
:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:
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Mon 02/06/12 12:09 PM

:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:


Thanks Tazz (((:heart: )))
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Mon 02/06/12 10:38 PM
Edited by Up2Us on Mon 02/06/12 10:39 PM
Nice write.....smokin
Love
its
style
format.....flowerforyou
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Mon 02/06/12 11:06 PM
flowerforyou nice write :)
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Tue 02/07/12 03:38 AM

Nice write.....smokin
Love
its
style
format.....flowerforyou


It was a "heart" felt write...If we allow it jealously can be very hurtful, very damaging....Jealously, a sign of insecurity and unhappiness.....

Thank you for the comment Up2Us!!...:heart:
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Tue 02/07/12 03:39 AM

flowerforyou nice write :)


(((((Penny)))))...Good morning!waving ...Thank you !flowerforyou :heart: flowerforyou
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Tue 02/07/12 04:45 AM
catch me I'm falling......for you :wink:
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Tue 02/07/12 04:48 AM

catch me I'm falling......for you :wink:


I got ya babe!!!:heart:
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Tue 02/07/12 04:53 AM


catch me I'm falling......for you :wink:


I got ya babe!!!:heart:
smitten

ok, we're gettin a bit mushy here laugh
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Tue 02/07/12 04:57 AM



catch me I'm falling......for you :wink:


I got ya babe!!!:heart:
smitten

ok, we're gettin a bit mushy here laugh


Yes deer.....:tongue: Don't you have work to dO?pitchfork

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Tue 02/07/12 04:58 AM




catch me I'm falling......for you :wink:


I got ya babe!!!:heart:
smitten

ok, we're gettin a bit mushy here laugh


Yes deer.....:tongue: Don't you have work to dO?pitchfork


yes deer I dO ohwell
later waving
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Tue 02/07/12 05:02 AM





catch me I'm falling......for you :wink:


I got ya babe!!!:heart:
smitten

ok, we're gettin a bit mushy here laugh


Yes deer.....:tongue: Don't you have work to dO?pitchfork


yes deer I dO ohwell
later waving


Bye....waving

whoa
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Tue 02/07/12 06:32 AM
flowerforyou
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Tue 02/07/12 06:40 AM

flowerforyou


(((((:heart: )))))
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Thu 02/09/12 11:32 AM

jealously

I thought I knew
people who
claimed to be
one with me…

think you did too
but truth not true…

Hit the wall, don't fall...

but
if
you
do
I'll
catch
you…

and
I
know
you'll
catch
me
toO…:heart:


http://youtu.be/BdKtS4jgMHA



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Thu 02/09/12 04:02 PM


Nice write.....smokin
Love
its
style
format.....flowerforyou


....Jealously, a sign of insecurity and unhappiness.....



so true, let love rule, you two will shine! flowerforyou i agree with UP2us, i enjoyed the style, the flow of the...fall. well done! flowerforyou
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Thu 02/09/12 04:57 PM



Nice write.....smokin
Love
its
style
format.....flowerforyou


....Jealously, a sign of insecurity and unhappiness.....



so true, let love rule, you two will shine! flowerforyou i agree with UP2us, i enjoyed the style, the flow of the...fall. well done! flowerforyou



TY x 10 ...Your post means a lot to me Bastet...flowerforyou :heart:
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Thu 02/09/12 09:09 PM
Pretty good... I do not know if it was intended but it looked like their was a play on words towards the end.


Bravo!!!
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Fri 02/10/12 04:16 AM

Pretty good... I do not know if it was intended but it looked like their was a play on words towards the end.


Bravo!!!


TY Mirage.......play on words?.........never!!:wink:

flowerforyou
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