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Topic: It shows,,,,in their eyes.......
iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Thu 01/12/12 08:34 PM Edited by iam4u on Thu 01/12/12 08:36 PM
Alone,,surrendering. Here in all my beautiful life's ending. Trusting, reassured, cared for. Here in my bed, waiting to be fed. Buzzing, yelling, abused and bled. Can't even eat, the food I'm fed. A paradox of unjustified misrepresentations, from this Nation. Abandoned, mistreated, suspended, left in solitude and degradation. Living to last, then lastly living, I cannot find, That last word,,,,,,,forgiving.

tazzops Joined Sat 12/20/08 Posts: 33333	Fri 01/13/12 05:51 AM


Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Fri 01/13/12 06:19 AM
Alone,,surrendering. Here in all my beautiful life's ending. Trusting, reassured, cared for. Here in my bed, waiting to be fed. Buzzing, yelling, abused and bled. Can't even eat, the food I'm fed. A paradox of unjustified misrepresentations, from this Nation. Abandoned, mistreated, suspended, left in solitude and degradation. Living to last, then lastly living, I cannot find, That last word,,,,,,,forgiving. You got it Terry....Our elders .....All we have can be traced back to them!

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Fri 01/13/12 03:03 PM
Thanks Mr Tazz,,and this was with so many in mind,,who rest inside our city's and town's,,there,,in that place,,somany call The Retirement Center....Many never really feel,,retired there though...just help-less...

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Fri 01/13/12 03:05 PM
Alone,,surrendering. Here in all my beautiful life's ending. Trusting, reassured, cared for. Here in my bed, waiting to be fed. Buzzing, yelling, abused and bled. Can't even eat, the food I'm fed. A paradox of unjustified misrepresentations, from this Nation. Abandoned, mistreated, suspended, left in solitude and degradation. Living to last, then lastly living, I cannot find, That last word,,,,,,,forgiving. You got it Terry....Our elders .....All we have can be traced back to them! You caught it Leigh,,,I bet it showed in my eyes,,,huh?,,, This was just memories of my thoughts,,many years ago,,as I made a visit... Thanks for reading this.....

Mystique42 Joined Thu 04/12/07 Posts: 5045	Fri 01/13/12 08:55 PM
Terry.... another fantastic write! You are so right, and it seems to be so sad.

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Fri 01/13/12 08:57 PM


manOfewwords Joined Wed 10/22/08 Posts: 29908	Sat 01/14/12 01:46 AM
does it show in my eyes?

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Sat 01/14/12 08:07 AM
Thanks for reading this,,and I hope if any of you have a loved one in the Hospital or a Nursing Home,,Please keep them watched over well,,for some people don't and mistakes take lives.. And yes Jerry,,I SEE,,much compassion,,in your eyes,,,

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