Winter green
the whitened night
ready to be thankful

for all the angels
spread their gospel
as the wind fixes his stories

through the shaking
roller skating
smelly whole of dopes

as the crowd jumped
out from madness
flying in their church cloaks

shame undo the nightfall
white like your spreading gospel


Ill uproot that dead man hostel
clean him for the grace of
grave talk

black is black
forget a white hall


spend smiles on the best
most wildest intentions
beyond artificial invention
those emotions you were blessed in

I like it.

Sounds very religious.
And, as such, I like it.

Hope to see more. :)

Well my youngwriter,,I'd say it was much deeper than I go,,but after four times really trying to get it..
I will say I believe I like it....
ALL WRITES AND POEMS HERE are made for us to read and as they get made within YOU,,the writer,,we love to read your mind,,and their starts..WELCOME and keep them coming,,

I liked this piece, very deep. Good work and welcome