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Topic: ~i'm a kid again
teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Thu 12/22/11 07:25 AM
i'm a kid again growing up in a family where you didn't ask for presents then as if by magic presents would be under the tree christmas morning and santa would remember me and know i had tried to be a goodgirl and my parents would sit,watching faces as we opened gifts it never mattered what the presents were- it was joy so..santa..i want you to know i remember and i still try to be a goodgirl

tazzops Joined Sat 12/20/08 Posts: 33333	Thu 12/22/11 07:38 AM
You are indeed a good Girl.

Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Thu 12/22/11 07:40 AM
i'm a kid again growing up in a family where you didn't ask for presents then as if by magic presents would be under the tree christmas morning and santa would remember me and know i had tried to be a goodgirl and my parents would sit,watching faces as we opened gifts it never mattered what the presents were- it was joy so..santa..i want you to know i remember and i still try to be a goodgirl A perfect write...

manOfewwords Joined Wed 10/22/08 Posts: 29908	Thu 12/22/11 07:54 AM
really sweet

s1owhand Joined Fri 05/18/07 Posts: 29437	Thu 12/22/11 11:58 AM


teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Thu 12/29/11 10:29 AM
tazztops.. Leigh2154...kind of you...thankyou manOfewords... slowhand...smile... teasingbrunette

tazzops Joined Sat 12/20/08 Posts: 33333	Thu 12/29/11 06:45 PM
tazztops.. Leigh2154...kind of you...thankyou manOfewords... slowhand...smile... teasingbrunette

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Thu 12/29/11 07:29 PM
I HOPE this World,,always KEEPS this SPIRIT you wrote here,,,ALIVE For its such a GREAT EXPERIENCE to dream and live,,, Through a childs mind and eyes,,,,THIS WAS GREAT,,, TEASING,

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Fri 12/30/11 11:35 AM
iam4u.....thankyou for your words. may your wishes all come true before you search for them happy 2012 teasingbrunette

Teditis Joined Sun 03/07/10 Posts: 3597	Mon 01/23/12 02:48 PM Edited by Teditis on Mon 01/23/12 02:54 PM
i'm a kid again growing up in a family where you didn't ask for presents then as if by magic presents would be under the tree christmas morning and santa would remember me and know i had tried to be a goodgirl and my parents would sit,watching faces as we opened gifts it never mattered what the presents were- it was joy so..santa..i want you to know i remember and i still try to be a goodgirl Is it too illuminating to say that fools like me still believe... in peeps like you? And yeah, what the present are/were rarely matter do they? I couldn't remember 1'2 of them... but he thought behind them does seem to count. Go figure.

Teditis Joined Sun 03/07/10 Posts: 3597	Mon 01/23/12 02:53 PM Edited by Teditis on Mon 01/23/12 02:56 PM
Double posts can be presents too... js.

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Wed 01/25/12 07:25 AM
Teditis.......i still believe in good things,too...teasingbrunette

Teditis Joined Sun 03/07/10 Posts: 3597	Tue 01/31/12 10:49 AM Edited by Teditis on Tue 01/31/12 10:51 AM
As do I TB... and linking good feelings to the past, when we were kids always seems to be the place we go for that "magical-thing"... (ever hear this one? it by Randy Travis... country, so be forewarned http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TbkdDLFEDEM&ob=av2e ) I'm trying to learn to make new magic... we'll see, haha. PS... hope that Santa was good to ya'.

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Wed 02/01/12 07:51 AM
Teditis....smiled of the forewarned...i like country.... and that song,hadn't heard it in awhile... & a teardrop fell..ugh... & the universe was good to me this christmas... oh ya, the....TB...i'm not an affliction..just sayin'... am sooo laughing...

Teditis Joined Sun 03/07/10 Posts: 3597	Wed 02/01/12 11:37 AM Edited by Teditis on Wed 02/01/12 12:29 PM
Teditis....smiled of the forewarned...i like country.... and that song,hadn't heard it in awhile... & a teardrop fell..ugh... & the universe was good to me this christmas... oh ya, the....TB...i'm not an affliction..just sayin'... am sooo laughing... I'm glad that the universe was kind to ya... Christmas seems better that way. My real initials are TB... so don't take it as an offense. Still, your writings are contagious, haha. But... I'll figure something else to call you... prolly something unimaginititve like TeasingBrunette.

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Wed 02/01/12 12:30 PM
contagious..... and i'm still laughing,funny. i havn't listened to randytravis in a long time... playin' that one song and others...in my head today thankyou

Teditis Joined Sun 03/07/10 Posts: 3597	Wed 02/01/12 12:37 PM Edited by Teditis on Wed 02/01/12 12:38 PM
yw... thanks for sharing your writings with us. I look fo your stuff regularly... hope to see more. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iDBZZG9rmrk this is me in a nutshell... haha.

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Wed 02/01/12 02:56 PM
this too will pass... i missed the unimaginative the first time... maybe you can come up with some more..imaginative for me..

Teditis Joined Sun 03/07/10 Posts: 3597	Wed 02/01/12 03:02 PM
Aye... it will pass, or perhaps merely live along side new and wonderful things. I'll work on it... promise. Go write!

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Wed 02/01/12 03:07 PM
or i may untangle something....