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She lies awake as the hours crawl by
He has made her so proud Silently she prays for the day He tells her it's finally over It is no longer the life he wants to lead Countless times she thought of running to him Begging him to give it up But it was not her right to be so selfish He is her heart, her soul And though the fear of losing him Sometimes grips her like a vice She must stand tall Forget her own selfish fear Of what might be And stand behind him Silently praying for the day He tells her its finally over |
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VERY NICELY WORDED HUN, U HAVE SUCH GREAT TALENT
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Thats a really beautiful poem Shyprincess.
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thanks guys
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UR SO WELCOME HUN U KNOW I LOVE COMMENTING ON YOUR WRITING... KEEP IT UP HUN
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((Nicki))))
As always,, incredible |
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those of u who know me well enough know why i wrote it but is it the right thing to do? i mean would saying something be selfish?
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I dont think saying anything would be selfish all your doing is expressing how you feel hope that works
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im not gonna say anything no matter how much i cry at night...this is what he wants its just hard you know?
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yes hun it stinks, well if u need to talk you know im here and Ill try helping to the best of my ablities.. k
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yes hun it stinks, well if u need to talk you know im here and Ill try helping to the best of my ablities.. k
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yea i know and i appreciate it more than you'll ever know
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I believe what U have expressed here is by far one of most unselfish acts I've heard of in quite some time.Honestly I was taken back momentarily upon first read hon.Wow!gurl,I think U should be highly commended for this ultimate decision U choose to stay with.For I've seen the vast majority choose the other perhaps by way of the self-interest eternal struggle.Simply bearific S~P,I am honored 2 be ur friend sweetheart.Godspeed!Cybear(((((bear~hug))))))
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