Topic: TOGETHER WE STAND
shyprincess2062's photo
Thu 07/19/07 11:48 AM
She lies awake as the hours crawl by
He has made her so proud
Silently she prays for the day
He tells her it's finally over
It is no longer the life he wants to lead
Countless times she thought of running to him
Begging him to give it up
But it was not her right to be so selfish
He is her heart, her soul
And though the fear of losing him
Sometimes grips her like a vice
She must stand tall
Forget her own selfish fear
Of what might be
And stand behind him
Silently praying for the day
He tells her its finally over

GIRLYCHIC's photo
Thu 07/19/07 11:53 AM
VERY NICELY WORDED HUN, U HAVE SUCH GREAT TALENT
:smile:

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Thu 07/19/07 11:53 AM
Thats a really beautiful poem Shyprincess.happy

shyprincess2062's photo
Thu 07/19/07 11:55 AM
thanks guys

GIRLYCHIC's photo
Thu 07/19/07 11:56 AM
UR SO WELCOME HUN U KNOW I LOVE COMMENTING ON YOUR WRITING... KEEP IT UP HUN flowerforyou

LAMom's photo
Thu 07/19/07 11:58 AM
((Nicki))))
As always,, incredible flowerforyou flowerforyou

shyprincess2062's photo
Thu 07/19/07 12:01 PM
those of u who know me well enough know why i wrote it but is it the right thing to do? i mean would saying something be selfish?

GIRLYCHIC's photo
Thu 07/19/07 12:22 PM
I dont think saying anything would be selfish all your doing is expressing how you feel flowerforyou hope that works bigsmile

shyprincess2062's photo
Thu 07/19/07 12:24 PM
im not gonna say anything no matter how much i cry at night...this is what he wants its just hard you know?

GIRLYCHIC's photo
Thu 07/19/07 12:27 PM
yes hun it stinks, well if u need to talk you know im here and Ill try helping to the best of my ablities.. k :smile: flowerforyou

GIRLYCHIC's photo
Thu 07/19/07 12:27 PM
yes hun it stinks, well if u need to talk you know im here and Ill try helping to the best of my ablities.. k :smile: flowerforyou

shyprincess2062's photo
Thu 07/19/07 12:28 PM
yea i know and i appreciate it more than you'll ever know

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Thu 07/19/07 01:21 PM
I believe what U have expressed here is by far one of most unselfish acts I've heard of in quite some time.Honestly I was taken back momentarily upon first read hon.Wow!gurl,I think U should be highly commended for this ultimate decision U choose to stay with.For I've seen the vast majority choose the other perhaps by way of the self-interest eternal struggle.Simply bearific S~P,I am honored 2 be ur friend sweetheart.Godspeed!Cybear(((((bear~hug)))))):tongue: flowerforyou