I'm so sick of hurting for you...

Theres nothing left for me to do...

I tell my heart to just let go...

It knows no sorrow like the one before...

But yet the void that you have left behind...

Is yet agian the one that keeps me crying...

You dont even have it in you to let me go...

But it is because of you that I cant open my door...

When is it my turn to feel that way...

Always wishing on another day...

But I'm all out of wishes and fairy tale truths...

This is my life and it's completly without you...

My heart, body, and soul is filled with so much abbyss...

Is it this love that I soon will miss...

Were so wrong that we fit so right...

What I would give you feel you once more at night....

But for whatever reason it has come to this...

And I always will cherish our once shared kiss...
WRITTEN FOR AN EX, AWHILE AGO HOPE YOU GUYS ENJOY THANKS FOR READING

that's beautiful

thanks sassy

Beautiful

THANKS MOM

YW,,, Your writing is simply beautiful,,

aww your a sweetie thank u so much that really encourages me to keep writing wanted to share some other stuff on here but i think the words are a bit to graphic which stinks cause i love feedback on my writing but thank you agian

This is poetry Sweetie,, I for one would love to read more of your work,

Hugs
Denise

Thanks Mom I just didnt want it to get deleted or somethin its more on the erotic side but its dosent get all explicit more like erotic without using certain words what do u think should i post it

Post it,,,, Come on I am waiting ,, hmmmmmmmmmm still waiting

Lmao Erotic go for it heck I blew there minds a few weeks ago with some lol another good one girl sweet

THANKS TXS I APPERICATE IT

you are totally awesome gurl but ya don't need me to tell ya that!! LOL keep up the awesome work

THANK YOU SHY U KNOW I LOVE UR COMMENTS THOUGH U ARE AWESSOME AS WELL I LOVE YOUR WRITING

awwww well thanks but you are MUCH MUCH MUCH more awesome than i am

HONEY NO I THINK EVERYONE IS AWESSOME IN THERE WRITING YOUR INTELLGENT ENOUGH TO PUT WORDS ON PAPER THAT BRING OUT THE GOODNESS IN YOU THANK U SO MUCH YOU ARE SO SWEET

I'm touched I can relate

AWW THANKS CAREBEAR SO SWEET

This is so sad sweetheart,but of course very beautiful.A person can cause irreversible damage in a relationship by their words or actions or lack thereof.And as desperately as he or she wants 2 re-trace them footsteps in the hopes of getting it right the 2nd time it remains futile for the damage has been done sadly.As far as graphic,go for it gurly.That's why many of us are fighting off Moderation within the Poetry Forum.The reader is ultimately cheated if U squash the Poets ability of expression,honesty etc.then their words are diluted.Superb gurly keep up the great work & go for it sweetheart.Give it 2 us we can take it.Yeah!(((((bear~hug))))Godspeed!Cybear;=)

Thanks Cybear I love your words of wisdom for me love to hear everyones thoughts