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Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Mon 12/05/11 03:58 AM
"The Dream" Into the river and down the stream, there she goes chasing one more Dream... Midlife crisis come and gone, as the Dream she chases on and on... She can't seem to stop, her energy depleted, the Dream she know will be repeated... It's about the thing she never had, It's about a life devoid of bad... If only she could catch the Dream, she's sure all things would come to mean That life is good, people too, there's something redeeming in all we do... When will it end, this crazy Dream, when will she learn things are as they seem People are people everywhere, a world of sin, a life unfair So much she's lost and continues to, as she chases the Dream she chooses to.... Spend her life on a lost cause, while others learn to stop, to pause They smell the roses, they laugh at life, they know tomorrow will be alright But her, not her, she can't give up, the Dream she'll own with a little luck... She cuts off another piece of her soul, she offers it up to the Dream, OH NO !! The Dream he takes it and chews it up, then spits it out, he's had enough The heat spreads through her idle brain, she knows the Dream escaped again... The pain intense, a burning fire, it fill her heart with more desire... Into the river and down the stream, there she goes chasing one more Dream...

tazzops Joined Sat 12/20/08 Posts: 33333	Mon 12/05/11 06:24 AM


Sharris Joined Sun 12/10/06 Posts: 7300	Mon 12/05/11 07:17 AM
Bravo, Bravo, well said and understood. Love this

Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Mon 12/05/11 07:53 AM
Bravo, Bravo, well said and understood. Love this Hi Tazz..... Thanks Sharris!!...It was a fun write...in a not so fun kind of way! Wishing you Holiday Joy!

boonedoggy61 Joined Fri 09/09/11 Posts: 10425	Mon 12/05/11 08:01 AM
Very good wright sweetheart!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Mon 12/05/11 08:09 AM
Very good wright sweetheart!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thanks Boone!!...need to fix my type O's though .... A perfectionist who can't key... "The Dream" Into the river and down the stream, there she goes chasing one more Dream... Midlife crisis come and gone, as the Dream she chases on and on... She can't seem to stop, her energy depleted, the Dream she knows will be repeated... It's about the thing she never had, It's about a life devoid of bad... If only she could catch the Dream, she's sure all things would come to mean That life is good, people too, there's something redeeming in all we do... When will it end, this crazy Dream, when will she learn things are as they seem People are people everywhere, a world of sin, a life unfair So much she's lost and continues to, as she chases the Dream she chooses to.... Spend her life on a lost cause, while others learn to stop, to pause They smell the roses, they laugh at life, they know tomorrow will be alright But her, not her, she can't give up, the Dream she'll own with a little luck... She cuts off another piece of her soul, she offers it up to the Dream, OH NO !! The Dream he takes it and chews it up, then spits it out, he's had enough The heat spreads through her idle brain, she knows the Dream escaped again... The pain intense, a burning fire, it fills her heart with more desire... Into the river and down the stream, there she goes chasing one more Dream...

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Mon 12/05/11 08:56 PM
"The Dream" Into the river and down the stream, there she goes chasing one more Dream... Midlife crisis come and gone, as the Dream she chases on and on... She can't seem to stop, her energy depleted, the Dream she know will be repeated... It's about the thing she never had, It's about a life devoid of bad... If only she could catch the Dream, she's sure all things would come to mean That life is good, people too, there's something redeeming in all we do... When will it end, this crazy Dream, when will she learn things are as they seem People are people everywhere, a world of sin, a life unfair So much she's lost and continues to, as she chases the Dream she chooses to.... Spend her life on a lost cause, while others learn to stop, to pause They smell the roses, they laugh at life, they know tomorrow will be alright But her, not her, she can't give up, the Dream she'll own with a little luck... She cuts off another piece of her soul, she offers it up to the Dream, OH NO !! The Dream he takes it and chews it up, then spits it out, he's had enough The heat spreads through her idle brain, she knows the Dream escaped again... The pain intense, a burning fire, it fill her heart with more desire... Into the river and down the stream, there she goes chasing one more Dream... OMG,,I SWEAR to you,,I JUST NOW caught this and read it well,,and all day I have had an idea for a poen I just posted it,,and the mild thought in THIS by you..Is what MINE was close in relationship to,,,Now THATS just spooky,,,, I REALLY like this Liegh,,and my first thought,,as I read it half way down,,was to give you some poetic words back,,BUT,then I read YOUR choice of words and freaked,,,lol,,I'm silly like THAT,,,

Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Tue 12/06/11 04:15 PM
"The Dream" Into the river and down the stream, there she goes chasing one more Dream... Midlife crisis come and gone, as the Dream she chases on and on... She can't seem to stop, her energy depleted, the Dream she know will be repeated... It's about the thing she never had, It's about a life devoid of bad... If only she could catch the Dream, she's sure all things would come to mean That life is good, people too, there's something redeeming in all we do... When will it end, this crazy Dream, when will she learn things are as they seem People are people everywhere, a world of sin, a life unfair So much she's lost and continues to, as she chases the Dream she chooses to.... Spend her life on a lost cause, while others learn to stop, to pause They smell the roses, they laugh at life, they know tomorrow will be alright But her, not her, she can't give up, the Dream she'll own with a little luck... She cuts off another piece of her soul, she offers it up to the Dream, OH NO !! The Dream he takes it and chews it up, then spits it out, he's had enough The heat spreads through her idle brain, she knows the Dream escaped again... The pain intense, a burning fire, it fill her heart with more desire... Into the river and down the stream, there she goes chasing one more Dream... OMG,,I SWEAR to you,,I JUST NOW caught this and read it well,,and all day I have had an idea for a poen I just posted it,,and the mild thought in THIS by you..Is what MINE was close in relationship to,,,Now THATS just spooky,,,, I REALLY like this Liegh,,and my first thought,,as I read it half way down,,was to give you some poetic words back,,BUT,then I read YOUR choice of words and freaked,,,lol,,I'm silly like THAT,,, This is a good review right darlin?!!!????? Thank you!! Off to find yours...

insangel Joined Thu 11/03/11 Posts: 258	Tue 12/06/11 04:26 PM
very nice

tazzops Joined Sat 12/20/08 Posts: 33333	Tue 12/06/11 04:29 PM
Bravo, Bravo, well said and understood. Love this Hi Tazz..... Thanks Sharris!!...It was a fun write...in a not so fun kind of way! Wishing you Holiday Joy! Hello; Leigh really liked this one. Thank you for sharing.

Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Tue 12/06/11 04:31 PM
Bravo, Bravo, well said and understood. Love this Hi Tazz..... Thanks Sharris!!...It was a fun write...in a not so fun kind of way! Wishing you Holiday Joy! Hello; Leigh really liked this one. Thank you for sharing. Hi Tazz ...You are the best of the best!....Thank you sweet man!!

pkd1220 Joined Thu 05/24/07 Posts: 8318	Tue 12/06/11 05:01 PM
great write

Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Tue 12/06/11 05:04 PM
very nice TY very much!

Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Tue 12/06/11 05:04 PM
great write Appreciate you!!!

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Tue 12/06/11 07:13 PM
"The Dream" Into the river and down the stream, there she goes chasing one more Dream... Midlife crisis come and gone, as the Dream she chases on and on... She can't seem to stop, her energy depleted, the Dream she know will be repeated... It's about the thing she never had, It's about a life devoid of bad... If only she could catch the Dream, she's sure all things would come to mean That life is good, people too, there's something redeeming in all we do... When will it end, this crazy Dream, when will she learn things are as they seem People are people everywhere, a world of sin, a life unfair So much she's lost and continues to, as she chases the Dream she chooses to.... Spend her life on a lost cause, while others learn to stop, to pause They smell the roses, they laugh at life, they know tomorrow will be alright But her, not her, she can't give up, the Dream she'll own with a little luck... She cuts off another piece of her soul, she offers it up to the Dream, OH NO !! The Dream he takes it and chews it up, then spits it out, he's had enough The heat spreads through her idle brain, she knows the Dream escaped again... The pain intense, a burning fire, it fill her heart with more desire... Into the river and down the stream, there she goes chasing one more Dream... OMG,,I SWEAR to you,,I JUST NOW caught this and read it well,,and all day I have had an idea for a poen I just posted it,,and the mild thought in THIS by you..Is what MINE was close in relationship to,,,Now THATS just spooky,,,, I REALLY like this Liegh,,and my first thought,,as I read it half way down,,was to give you some poetic words back,,BUT,then I read YOUR choice of words and freaked,,,lol,,I'm silly like THAT,,, This is a good review right darlin?!!!????? Thank you!! Off to find yours... Sorry,,,,,,,,,,,,,,yes,,ITS A GREAT REVIEW!!!!!!!!! I REALLY LIKED IT,,,,, I was just BLOWN AWAY with the thoughts we shared,,,,, Glad you did see what my dangggggg IT,,was all about,,,,

Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Tue 12/06/11 07:33 PM
"The Dream" Into the river and down the stream, there she goes chasing one more Dream... Midlife crisis come and gone, as the Dream she chases on and on... She can't seem to stop, her energy depleted, the Dream she know will be repeated... It's about the thing she never had, It's about a life devoid of bad... If only she could catch the Dream, she's sure all things would come to mean That life is good, people too, there's something redeeming in all we do... When will it end, this crazy Dream, when will she learn things are as they seem People are people everywhere, a world of sin, a life unfair So much she's lost and continues to, as she chases the Dream she chooses to.... Spend her life on a lost cause, while others learn to stop, to pause They smell the roses, they laugh at life, they know tomorrow will be alright But her, not her, she can't give up, the Dream she'll own with a little luck... She cuts off another piece of her soul, she offers it up to the Dream, OH NO !! The Dream he takes it and chews it up, then spits it out, he's had enough The heat spreads through her idle brain, she knows the Dream escaped again... The pain intense, a burning fire, it fill her heart with more desire... Into the river and down the stream, there she goes chasing one more Dream... OMG,,I SWEAR to you,,I JUST NOW caught this and read it well,,and all day I have had an idea for a poen I just posted it,,and the mild thought in THIS by you..Is what MINE was close in relationship to,,,Now THATS just spooky,,,, I REALLY like this Liegh,,and my first thought,,as I read it half way down,,was to give you some poetic words back,,BUT,then I read YOUR choice of words and freaked,,,lol,,I'm silly like THAT,,, This is a good review right darlin?!!!????? Thank you!! Off to find yours... Sorry,,,,,,,,,,,,,,yes,,ITS A GREAT REVIEW!!!!!!!!! I REALLY LIKED IT,,,,, I was just BLOWN AWAY with the thoughts we shared,,,,, Glad you did see what my dangggggg IT,,was all about,,,,

RainbowTrout Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 13869	Tue 12/06/11 07:50 PM
Beautifully written. I enjoy reading what you wrote.

Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Tue 12/06/11 07:55 PM
Beautifully written. I enjoy reading what you wrote. Thanks RT...back at you!!