Topic: she twisted the knife as she pulled it out
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Fri 12/02/11 12:32 AM
i have claimed countless
nights like this;
sleeping on a floor when
a bed even would
be too cold.

and the lingering
sting of limes
across fingertips of memories
pawing
at my lips
opens me wide like a science project
grasshopper,
good for students of craft.
over-ripe smelly replaceable, yes, there
have been claimed nights like this one.

my most faithful whores were virgins
and my most forgiving readers were
lovers,
cherry stem hips
tongue-tied to the dirty bed

i don't own.

and the floor smells like a solvent
and my lungs burn a little
and i'd rather keep
it empty as i can

when they come for my poems
i want them to have to
dig
like dying ants
against the soft grey tissue
i belong to.

if you love me so much
why
don't you lick my eyes
taste my sorrow
or
at least help me
shop for a new lamp.

then she twisted the knife as she pulled it out of my side
and we cuddled for a few minutes
before i couldn't stand to look at
her bedsheets.

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Fri 12/02/11 02:14 AM
one word, AWESOME

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Fri 12/02/11 04:03 AM

i have claimed countless
nights like this;
sleeping on a floor when
a bed even would
be too cold.

and the lingering
sting of limes
across fingertips of memories
pawing
at my lips
opens me wide like a science project
grasshopper,
good for students of craft.
over-ripe smelly replaceable, yes, there
have been claimed nights like this one.

my most faithful whores were virgins
and my most forgiving readers were
lovers,
cherry stem hips
tongue-tied to the dirty bed

i don't own.

and the floor smells like a solvent
and my lungs burn a little
and i'd rather keep
it empty as i can

when they come for my poems
i want them to have to
dig
like dying ants
against the soft grey tissue
i belong to.

if you love me so much
why
don't you lick my eyes
taste my sorrow
or
at least help me
shop for a new lamp.

then she twisted the knife as she pulled it out of my side
and we cuddled for a few minutes
before i couldn't stand to look at
her bedsheets.


Read this! You might try to hate it, but it will be impossible if you like your meat rare...Amazing content, second helping please!biggrin

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Fri 12/02/11 05:38 AM
flowerforyou

nice to see you and your writing again

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Fri 12/02/11 08:40 AM
Amazing write PP..Love how your words talk..

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Fri 12/02/11 10:28 AM
Even nice and kind feels like a whore.
Headless unable to taste the cake
of retribution in this execution.

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Fri 12/02/11 11:25 AM
You seem to always make me relate although we couldn't be farther apart. Amazing as you. So have you left for Cali yet?

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Fri 12/02/11 03:07 PM
wonderfully done... drinker

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Fri 12/02/11 04:31 PM
:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

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Sun 12/04/11 07:06 AM
plastic_pancakes...likeit!

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Sun 12/04/11 01:22 PM
Your poems always make their OWN very COOL STATEMENTS of expressions and voids we sometimes fall into in our own Worlds of living out life..
I like most of everything I have read that you write,,and trust me here,,I AM NO-ONE to give YOU justice in your writings.
I read,,and make sillys of my own complications of this life?
I personally think and feel,,your DAMN GOOD at working words with that dark area WE ALL CARRY inside us.
Now,,only because I am maybe a simple man of thoughts here,,lol
When reading most of your writes,,TO ME,,OK?,,lol,,
They seem to TRY and go ,,,just a little to long in statement around the feelings your making,,not greatly,,but less,,would be so much MORE, in the whole to me?
I LOVE the depths you draw us into,,and the perceptions using the darker interiors to draw an awareness with.
But some seem to over-GIVE THAT!
Like YOUR trying to hard to dramatize that picture in our minds?
OK,,IF any of THIS made any sense to you at all,,lol,,
I don't EVER give ANYONE my ALL in thoughts to be this critical of any ones writings,You see its because I truly feel your above MANY in your way of expressing the inner truths to so many lives..
I hope THIS doesn't offend you as its truly a compliment HERE,,I have never given to a writer..I DON'T CRITIQUE,,,,YET,,I did here for this and for you,,in hopes of one day saying,,I KNOW THIS MAN'S WORK,,
He USE to be on Mingle,,,As A friend reads me a poem from a book you wrote.......bigsmile GOOD LUCK in ALL YOU DO,,and ALWAYS,,keep on writing with all you feel.....drinker

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Sun 12/04/11 01:25 PM
Great write.:smile: