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Topic: November Rose
Sharris Joined Sun 12/10/06 Posts: 7300	Mon 11/28/11 04:13 PM
November Rose November rose, with papered skirt drying in the cold, holding on to all she was, a beauty just her own. Simple sweet a thought observed. Alone she held on tight. With elegance and winsome grace Her season bids good night. SadieLu 11/2011

tazzops Joined Sat 12/20/08 Posts: 33333	Mon 11/28/11 04:17 PM


kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Mon 11/28/11 04:23 PM


Teditis Joined Sun 03/07/10 Posts: 3597	Mon 11/28/11 04:34 PM
now, that seems so sad... (if I read it right)

Sharris Joined Sun 12/10/06 Posts: 7300	Mon 11/28/11 04:38 PM
Thank you guys...it was thoughts from a photograph titled "November Rose". A season ending is always a little bittersweet, don't you think?

Teditis Joined Sun 03/07/10 Posts: 3597	Mon 11/28/11 05:21 PM Edited by Teditis on Mon 11/28/11 05:21 PM
Can you post the image? (...and yes, bittersweet, works)

Sharris Joined Sun 12/10/06 Posts: 7300	Mon 11/28/11 05:24 PM
Can you post the image? (...and yes, bittersweet, works) Sadly not at this time. I feel it would make a beautiful card, though.

Teditis Joined Sun 03/07/10 Posts: 3597	Mon 11/28/11 05:26 PM
'k...

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Tue 11/29/11 02:58 PM
Thank you guys...it was thoughts from a photograph titled "November Rose". A season ending is always a little bittersweet, don't you think? at the very least...

RainbowTrout Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 13869	Tue 11/29/11 03:18 PM
Hey. Nice poem. Thanks for sharing.

teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Sun 12/04/11 07:11 AM
S.....the first line..papered skirt...great visual for me...teasingbrunette

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Sun 12/04/11 01:02 PM
Like so many of your writings Sadie,, Your Vail of definitions between worlds of phrase and those of heart mix to produce us an image of material facts to review within.. Beautiful in their texture, scented with bitter sweet emotion. Combined to ignite our passions of truth as we feel each piece of statement, every small tattered bit,,we read,,and ENJOY!!

Sharris Joined Sun 12/10/06 Posts: 7300	Sun 12/04/11 01:20 PM
Like so many of your writings Sadie,, Your Vail of definitions between worlds of phrase and those of heart mix to produce us an image of material facts to review within.. Beautiful in their texture, scented with bitter sweet emotion. Combined to ignite our passions of truth as we feel each piece of statement, every small tattered bit,,we read,,and ENJOY!! No one has ever said that of me. Thank you, Terry. I am taken a back. Sharing this, is poetry within itself.

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