Topic: Forever Love...
afriQueen22's photo
Mon 11/28/11 06:13 AM
Edited by afriQueen22 on Mon 11/28/11 06:43 AM
Dusk 'til dawn
Dawn 'til dusk.
She sits.
She waits.
Greeting each new day with the same indifference with which she bids the old farewell.

She lost, yet still loves.
Flowers blooming in the graveyard, watered by the tears of loved ones left behind.
In her heart, he continues to live.
In her reality, he has ceased to be.
A promise of forever, and forever it will be.

Dusk 'til dawn
Dawn 'til dusk.
She'll sit.
She'll wait.
Until her night no longer gives way to day,
And hand-in-hand, they'll walk away from this life,
To love in the next.

Sharris's photo
Mon 11/28/11 07:25 AM
You have such a deeply reflective sense that flows from this expression. The reader begins to be drawn in, waiting, wondering if...will it always be this way or will there be a silent change that resolves the truth in love.

no photo
Mon 11/28/11 07:30 AM
:thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

Optomistic69's photo
Mon 11/28/11 07:35 AM
Flowers blooming in the graveyard, watered by the tears of loved ones left behind.

flowerforyou

afriQueen22's photo
Mon 11/28/11 08:13 AM
blushing Thank you... All of you.

no photo
Mon 11/28/11 08:25 AM
Thank you for your writing.

kc0003's photo
Mon 11/28/11 03:30 PM
flowerforyou

Loy822's photo
Mon 11/28/11 03:34 PM
heartrending and beautiful

Teditis's photo
Mon 11/28/11 05:40 PM
Very nice.... reminds me of a song.

anyway,flowerforyou .

afriQueen22's photo
Mon 11/28/11 08:11 PM
Thank youflowerforyou