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      This poem is brought to you by a guy who was waiting in line at 7am at school! =D ...enjoy!
 
  She moves like a metaphor With a smile that I would love to adore A smooth temptation What an incantation That brings forth a stirring sensation Sought by vultures who know no better A fragility that could undeservingly wither Though no fortune favors the considered Left to gaze at such a wondrous figure She`s poetry in motion That ceases to deliver.  | 
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        Up2Us
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        Wed 11/02/11 08:09 PM
       
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Awesome write.....smooth flow & nice play on words....    
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      Welcome
 
  enjoyable metaphors.  | 
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      Nice write and welcome.. 
    
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      thanks everyone! =) i do write through wordplay and music =) 
     
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