~SO I THOUGHT ID POST ANOTHER POEM, JUST TO GIVE YOU A LITTLE BIT MORE OF MY WRITING ABILITES. I LOVE ALL COMMENTS WETHER IT BE GOOD OR BAD! I HOPE YOU ALL ENJOY! THANKS FOR READING!
THIS POEM GOT INSPIRED BECAUSE FOR SEEM REASON THIS IS HOW IM TREATED BY MOST GUYS:
What part of me wanting you dont you ****ing get...

Yet I keep getting the **** end of the stick...

I am fed up now, with you and your games...

I'm walking away now, with my head down in shame...

Cause I really thought we would of been a could match...

I thought me falling for you, was one hell of a catch...

But I couldnt of been more blind...

And it's all coming to me so clear this time...

I would and do everything possible for you...

Still you dont have the slightest clue...

It took some time but now I realize...

That its not me with blinded eyes...

I cant and wont change who I am for you...

And if you cant see what your missing out on then your the foo...

You always deceide when you have time for me...

And me waiting on you, now thats a real pity...

At least I realize now...

My tears for you are all dried out...

You cant even see me, its always tomorrow, or some lame excuse...

Now with me walking away you wont have to choose...

But even with me writing this, we both now that its not true...

Cause at the snap of your fingers I would come running back to you...

But I wouldnt chance it this time around...

I can only get up so many times, after being knocked down...

And why would I want to be with you anyways...

You are so cowardly, and thats suppose to get me to stay...

I dont think so...

I am walking out the door...

I truly am scared for you, with the way you handled this...

Who would of known the love that you are to miss...

But whats that, you wanted to be single, cause you havent in a while...

Good luck with that as I leave with a smile...

We may catch up later on...

But are you willing to wait that long...

What if it's to late then and someone has taken my hand...

Oh wait then agian what am I saying your the one who doesnt want to stand...

So heres goodbye to a boy, who doesnt know what its like to be a real man...

And never took the time who see me for all that I am...

Heres to you, your that boy...

No longer will I just be another toy...

Girly, The poemtellsthe story, butit soundslike you wrote it out of anger, granted ,nowoman needs to be treated that way and if you took out the obscene words, it could fit anyone,but that and what you wrote about, points it in your direction, you are speaking with the poem in the third person.

Oh, that is so sad,
how some people can take advantage
of someone else's love and devotion...
Now, dear little sister,
Stand true to your convictions...
Be strong and do not give that poor excuse
for a human being anymore of your time or energy or love...
You are done with him...
He didn't even deserve what you gave him...
Certainly do not give in anymore....
Don't throw your precious pearls before swine...
Definitely time to move on...

Take care and God Bless you

That's awesome G~C.Once again your heart wide open with all of your emotions & feelings being put right out into the wide open before him and so undeserving of U he was.Sadly a lil immature boy who took advantage of a woman with such a beautiful heart.This is such a foolish act on his part & 1 day he will come to regret that decision I'm certain.But he has lost now,& the next man who wins your heart shall be blessed indeed.I wish U happiness & contentment sweetheart.Great release & read by the way.Godspeed!Cybear;=)

Your poem is true art. Honesty of emotion. I'm trying to make my stone heart soft again, and you helped. My god, it hurts to fall in and out of love, and feel it. But expressing ourselves help.