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i fear
the stranger with giants' blood i fear the stranger with eyes- abrasive- as sandpaper against skin i fear the stranger standing in the doorway of shadows i fear the stranger with fingers,grasping- claiming their treat |
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i fear
the stranger with eyes- abrasive- as sandpaper against skin I love this bit..I've met many a person with that description -shudder- ..Fab write TB.. |
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Good write
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Great visuals, great poem.
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Nice write....
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Always hugs.
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Ainjel...i originally had the line as a voice as abrasive as sandpaper against skin...thankoyu for reading.
thewaterbearer...thankyou. pkd1220...thankyou. Up2Us...my halloween bit...pleased you read it. always hugs...or tazztops...thankyou. teasingbrunette |
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once again-->>
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manOfewwords...aww,thankyou.
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Awesome write... makes me wanna apologize for being a man.
Naturally doing what others turn into a nightmare... But... what is the "trick"? I'm a bit dense sometimes... |
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it was..around halloween time....
that's all..that's it... trick & treat... |
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it was..around halloween time.... that's all..that's it... trick & treat... I do see... and firmly believe. Still, it was a week away at best... now the rest of the story? haha. |
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Nice write Teasin,,kind of made me think of that song,,by the Kelly Clarkson,,Because of You...very sad....
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