Topic: ~ trick
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Wed 10/19/11 10:30 AM
i fear
the stranger
with giants' blood

i fear
the stranger
with eyes-
abrasive-
as sandpaper
against skin

i fear
the stranger
standing
in the doorway
of shadows

i fear
the stranger
with fingers,grasping-
claiming
their
treat

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Wed 10/19/11 01:17 PM
i fear
the stranger
with eyes-
abrasive-
as sandpaper
against skin

I love this bit..I've met many a person with that description
-shudder- ..Fab write TB..

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Wed 10/19/11 01:20 PM
Good writeflowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

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Wed 10/19/11 03:01 PM
Great visuals, great poem.

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Wed 10/19/11 03:19 PM
Nice write....flowerforyou

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Wed 10/19/11 05:49 PM
Always hugs. :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

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Thu 10/20/11 09:36 AM
Ainjel...i originally had the line as a voice as abrasive as sandpaper against skin...thankoyu for reading.

thewaterbearer...thankyou.

pkd1220...thankyou.

Up2Us...my halloween bit...pleased you read it.

always hugs...or tazztops...thankyou.

teasingbrunette

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Thu 10/20/11 09:40 AM
once again-->> :heart:

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Thu 10/20/11 09:44 AM
manOfewwords...aww,thankyou.

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Thu 02/02/12 10:38 AM
Awesome write... makes me wanna apologize for being a man.
Naturally doing what others turn into a nightmare...
But... what is the "trick"? I'm a bit dense sometimes...

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Thu 02/02/12 12:43 PM
it was..around halloween time....
that's all..that's it...
trick & treat...

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Thu 02/02/12 05:21 PM

it was..around halloween time....
that's all..that's it...
trick & treat...

I do see... and firmly believe.
Still, it was a week away at best... now the rest of the story?
haha.

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Thu 02/02/12 06:33 PM
:heart: Nice write Teasin,,kind of made me think of that song,,by the Kelly Clarkson,,Because of You...very sad....flowers