Topic: Paper bag.........
no photo
Sun 10/16/11 11:29 PM


Paper bag

Erroneous lies upon a abstract truth.
Creating crimson skies, that rain down conviction.
Holding up a umbrella of pervasiveness.
Rocks of judgements and accusations fly.
A stigma of doubt, on a cloudy day within your life.

Paper bag asphyxiation
Twilight Zone liaison

Descending like falling stars possessed by gravity.
Relationships break apart, a symposium of madness.
Tears become a memento of faded innocents.
Love falls martyred to heartaches blind reign.

Paper bag asphyxiation
Twilight Zone liaison

A train wreck waiting amidst taboo winds.
Notorious liaison, a novelty of heartache.
Sabotaged oasis, rigorous perceptions.
Tattooed formality of allusive malice.
Paper bag asphyxiation of duplicity.....smokin


Poem:
MHS©Copyright 2011

no photo
Tue 10/18/11 12:19 PM
Up2Us....i like this...
tattoed formality of allusive malice......

teasingbrunette

no photo
Tue 10/18/11 12:58 PM

Up2Us....i like this...
tattoed formality of allusive malice......

teasingbrunette


Glad this particular portion caught your eye.....flowerforyou :wink:

ArtGurl's photo
Tue 10/18/11 05:41 PM
:thumbsup: flowerforyou

no photo
Tue 10/18/11 05:57 PM
Sabotaged oasis...love those two words together

no photo
Tue 10/18/11 07:46 PM

Sabotaged oasis...love those two words together
Yes, very gripping......

Glad you appreciated the write....smokin

ArtGurl & pkd1220.....flowerforyou


no photo
Wed 10/19/11 04:32 AM
Edited by Up2Us on Wed 10/19/11 04:33 AM
Tears become a memento of faded innocents.


Is my favorite line in this poem...smokin



.