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Localgirl_032003 · 2011-10-01T07:59:57-07:00

Love in my life is like sand, I give it care and attention, Then a strong gust of wind sifts it through my hand, I lose yet again

Topic: Life sometimes..tell me what u think of this?
Localgirl_032003 Joined Sat 09/24/11 Posts: 31	Sat 10/01/11 07:59 AM
Love in my life is like sand, I give it care and attention, Then a strong gust of wind sifts it through my hand, I lose yet again

tazzops Joined Sat 12/20/08 Posts: 33333	Sat 10/01/11 08:01 AM


teasingbrunette Joined Tue 05/26/09 Posts: 5449	Sat 10/01/11 09:34 AM
i like it... teasingbrunette

Up2Us Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 3926	Sat 10/01/11 10:33 AM
Nice write....