Topic: Transient Warp
Yakamoto's photo
Sat 09/10/11 01:02 PM
Here I am
just as I–am
except the waves are
passing through me too–fast
each wave is–too damn strong
each wave concealed to the high-minded kept only–half an eye
the–rapid succession of –forceful blows of–fear–imposing itself into my mind
imminent-impact infiltrating as sly as a snake but as powerful as a rushing bull I–
cannot stop it now as it heads my way –I stand still–frozen.
Will it hit me? Will the bull–hit me? I am–not moving.
This trajectory set in–stone there is no–diversion
I am in its path and it still–comes my life
doesn’t–flash before my eyes
I see only the horns
and then–
nothing.

no photo
Sat 09/10/11 01:16 PM
Nice write....smokin

Yakamoto's photo
Sat 09/10/11 01:18 PM
:smile: thanks

d4tc's photo
Mon 09/12/11 09:28 AM
cool write man.

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